Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是校英文報(bào)的編輯李華，請用給來自英國的交換生Eric寫一封郵件，感謝他為校報(bào)提供稿件。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 表示感謝；

2. 簡要評價(jià)其稿件；

3. 希望繼續(xù)供稿。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Eric,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Eric,

I am writing to express our thanks for your articles for our school English newspaper.

You have been contributing to our English newspaper since you came to our school as an exchange student. We really appreciate your excellent writing skills and your serious attitude to your work. Your articles cover a large variety of topics, including history culture, travel and school life, from which readers have learned more about Britain and benefited a lot. You have become one of the best loved writers of the paper. I believe with your articles, our English newspaper will become more and more popular.

Looking forward to more articles from you!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，感謝來自英國的交換生Eric為校報(bào)提供稿件。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

人稱：第一、二人稱

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

要點(diǎn)：

1. 表示感謝；

2. 簡要評價(jià)其稿件；

3. 希望繼續(xù)供稿。

第二步：列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

English newspaper；contribute to；exchange student；writing skills；a large variety of；history culture；school life；learn about；one of the best…；more and more popular；look forward to等

第三步：連詞成句

1. I am writing to express our thanks for your articles for our school English newspaper.

2.You have been contributing to our English newspaper since you came to our school as an exchange student.

3. We really appreciate your excellent writing skills and your serious attitude to your work.

4. Your articles cover a large variety of topics, including history culture, travel and school life, from which readers have learned more about Britain and benefited a lot.

5. You have become one of the best loved writers of the paper.

6. I believe with your articles, our English newspaper will become more and more popular.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

for；since；as；and等

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改