Question

4．假如你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生Tom．前不久，你參加了全國英語演講比賽并獲得一等獎．請用英語給�？瘜懸黄�文章，談?wù)勀愕捏w會．內(nèi)容主要包括：
1付出才有回報；
2收獲自信和友誼；
3感激之情．
注意：1詞數(shù)100左右；
2可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3開頭語巳為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took part in several days ago，I have a lot to share with you．．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們寫參加了全國英語演講比賽并獲得一等獎的體會．這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時，內(nèi)容要點包括：付出才有回報；收獲自信和友誼；感激之情．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為參加了全國英語演講比賽并獲得一等獎．第二部分為．獲獎體會．
重點短語與句型：
look back to 負(fù)擔(dān)…
take part in  熬夜
establish the friendship 另一方面
in public充分利用
高分句型一：Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition that I took part in several days ago，I have a lot to share with you．此句用了現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語以及that 引導(dǎo)的定語從句
高分句型二：Additionally，I owe many thanks to my teachers and judges，without whose help，I couldn't have done such an excellent job．此句用了介詞+whose+n 引導(dǎo)的定語從句

解答 Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took part in several days ago，I have a lot to share with you．（高分句型一）（參加了全國英語演講比賽并獲得一等獎）
    Firstly，I feel really delighted that I've won the first prize in the competition，which makes me understand the true meaning of the proverb"No pains，no gains"．Besides，I've established the friendship with students from all over our country，from whom I've learned a lot．More importantly，taking this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public，thus developing my self-confidence．Additionally，I owe many thanks to my teachers and judges，without whose help，I couldn't have done such an excellent job（高分句型二）．To sum up，I will always treasure this meaningful and memorable experience（獲獎體會）

點評 第一步：審題，確定體裁格式、主體時態(tài)、中心人稱和內(nèi)容要點，避免填表式或履歷表式表達(dá)．
第二步：擬定提綱，創(chuàng)造良好的開端；敘述得體，布局謀篇；巧妙過渡，完美結(jié)尾．
第三步：遣詞造句，上下銜接，地道表達(dá)，行文成篇（注意"參考詞匯"的提示作用）．