Dear Amy,

 

For your problem, I’d like to share you my experience.

76．__________

You must understand that teachers are always very busy,

77．__________

especially when in classes that are large. Maybe

78．__________

your teacher is just struggling to providing personal

79．__________

attentions to all the students in your class. Your teacher’s

80．__________

behavior isn’t necessary a reflection on your performance

81．__________

and the amount of work you are doing. So don’t take it

82．__________

personally―and certainly don’t let them get you down. It is

83．__________

a fact of life that sometimes people hard work goes

84．__________

unnoticed. Because it is nice to receive encouragement

85．__________

and support, part of growing up is learning to study independently.

 

Your friend,

 

Jane

 

76．share后加with          

77．正確                   

78．去掉when        

79．providing改為provide   

 80．a(chǎn)ttentions改為attention       

81．necessary改為necessarily                               

82．a(chǎn)nd改為or 

83．them 改為 it             

84．people―people’s      

85．Because 改為Although或Though

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