Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

I used to be a very self-centered person, but in the past two years I really changed. I have started to think about other people after I think about myself. I am happy that I am becoming the different person.

I think my change started when I was at Palomar College. At first, I just want to get my degree and be left alone. I thought I was smarter than everyone else, so I hardly ever talked to anyone in my classes. By the end of my first semester, I was really lonely. That seemed as if everyone besides me had made friend and was having fun. So I tried an experiment. I started asking people around me how they were doing, and whether they were having trouble, I offered to help. That was real a big step for me. By the end of the year, I had several new friends, two of them are still my best friends today. 

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 I 和really 之間加have。

 after →before

 the →a

 want →wanted

 That →It

 besides → but/except 

 friend →friends

 whether→if/when

 real →really

 them → whom或者去掉are或者two前加and。

【解析】

試題分析：以自我為中心的人就不會有朋友，當(dāng)我意識到這一點時，我開始改變自己，努力為別人著想，幫助有麻煩的人，終于我交到了好朋友。

 根據(jù)in the past two years 這個時間狀語可知用現(xiàn)在完成時。所以在I 和really 之間加have。

 應(yīng)該理解為先人后己。所以after →before。

 成為一個不一樣的人。沒有特指。所以the →a。

 講述過去的事，要用動詞的過去式。所以want →wanted。

 It seems that …是固定句式，意為似乎……。所以That →It。

 everyone后面用but/except 表示除了….大家都……。所以besides → but/except 。

 交朋友應(yīng)該是make friends。

 如果/當(dāng)朋友有困難，我就主動幫助他們。所以whether→if/when。

 be 動詞后用副詞修飾。所以real →really。

 最后一句，要么后面是定語從句，要么是獨立主格結(jié)構(gòu)，要么前后是并列句。所以有三種變法：them → whom或者去掉are或者two前加and。

考點：短文改錯。