Question

13．請(qǐng)閱讀下面短文，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150 詞左右的文章．
Every one of us，rich or poor，should at least have one or two good friends．My friends will listen to me when I want to speak，will wipe my eyes when I cry，will take care of me when I am sick，and my friends will go together with me side by side through this journey of life．
A true friendship carries a long history of experience that determines who we are and keeps us connected．It is a treasure we should protect．Just hanging out together from time to time is not friendship．Friendship means lifelong friends who feel it's very necessary to give each other whatever help that might be required．Unfortunately，the better friends you are，the more probably you'll have disagreements．And the result can be what you don't want-an end to the relationship．The good news is that most troubled friendships can be mended．
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1．用約30個(gè)單詞概述上文概要；
2．結(jié)合上述信息，談?wù)勀銓?duì)朋友的看法及朋友對(duì)你的影響；
3．根據(jù)你的認(rèn)識(shí)，談?wù)劗?dāng)朋友之間發(fā)生矛盾時(shí)該怎么處理．
【寫作要求】
1．寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；
2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
3．不必寫標(biāo)題．
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)．
Friendship plays a very important role in our life．It's just like a cup of tea．When we're thirsty，it'll be our best choice．True friendship lasts forever even though sometimes it is troubled．（34 words）
As students，we can share more time with our friends．I often feel very lucky to have a lot of good friends，especially when I have Jim as one of my best friends．We have shared happiness and sorrows with each other since we were classmates at primary school．And we help each other with our study．
What if our friendship is troubled？First，we should never let our pride get in our way．Most of us can forgive each other when differences are brought out in the open．Second，apologize when we're wrong-even if we've been wronged．What's more，see things from our friends'point of view．Last but not least，accept that friendships change as our needs and lifestyles change．（123 words）．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
I often feel very lucky to have a lot of good friends，especially when I have Jim as one of my best friends．我常常覺得有很多的好朋友很幸運(yùn)，尤其是當(dāng)我有吉姆是我最好的朋友之一．
高分句型二：
Most of us can forgive each other when differences are brought out in the open．
我們大多數(shù)人都能原諒彼此的差異時(shí)進(jìn)行公開道歉．

解答 Friendship plays a very important role in our life．It's just like a cup of tea．When we're thirsty，it'll be our best choice．True friendship lasts forever even though sometimes it is troubled．（34 words）
As students，we can share more time with our friends．I often feel very lucky to have a lot of good friends，especially when I have Jim as one of my best friends（高分句型一）．We have shared happiness and sorrows with each other since we were classmates at primary school．And we help each other with our study．
What if our friendship is troubled？First，we should never let our pride get in our way．Most of us can forgive each other when differences are brought out in the open（高分句型二）．Second，apologize when we're wrong-even if we've been wronged．What's more，see things from our friends'point of view．Last but not least，accept that friendships change as our needs and lifestyles change．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．