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In most parts of the sea, there are plenty of fishes
and plants. Some live in near the top of the sea.	1．________
Others live deep down. There are also millions living	2．________
things that float into the sea.	3．________
Many fish lives by eating them.	4．________
The sea can be very cold. When the diver go downwards,	5．________
the sea becomes colder and colder. When the diver go deeper,	6．________
the water exerts great pressure with him.	7．________
The diver has to wear a diving suit which made of metal.	8．________
People who wants to go very deep should use a very strong	9．________
diving ship. They can even go down to a deep of 11 kilometres.	10．________

Answer 1

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解析：

1．此句中near為分詞，表示“在……附近；靠近……”之意，其前不必再有介詞in，故應(yīng)將in刪去。 　　2．“millions”在前面無基數(shù)詞修飾，而其后接名詞，表示“數(shù)百萬計(jì)”之意時(shí)，需在其后加of，即“millions of（數(shù)百萬計(jì)的……）”。 　　3．“在海里”，英譯為“in the sea”。介詞into則表示“到……里面，入……內(nèi)”，而in是“在……里面”，故應(yīng)把into改為in。 　　4．“fish”屬于單、復(fù)數(shù)同形名詞（fishes則常指“各種魚”），此處根據(jù)many得知，主語fish為復(fù)數(shù)，故應(yīng)將謂語動(dòng)詞lives改為live。 　　5．在when從句里，主語diver為單數(shù)第三人稱，根據(jù)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)的要求，應(yīng)將謂語動(dòng)詞go改為goes。 　　6．改正理由同5，即go改為goes。 　　7．“對(duì)（某人）產(chǎn)生壓力”，英譯為“to exert pressure on sb.”，“on”表示“在……上面”，而with則表示“與……在一起”，應(yīng)將with改為on。 　　8．過去分詞短語“made of metal”作后置定語來修飾suit，故which則屬多余之詞，應(yīng)去掉。 　　9．先行詞people是復(fù)數(shù)，因此，關(guān)系代詞who也是復(fù)數(shù)含義，根據(jù)主、謂語一致的規(guī)則，應(yīng)將從句中的謂語wants改為want。 　　10．“deep”在此處為形容詞，意為“深的”，但根根句意，此句表示“這樣，人們甚至可以下潛到11公里的深水中”，這里“深”為介詞to的賓語，故應(yīng)將形容詞deep改為相應(yīng)的名詞depth。