Question

9月13日你和同學(xué)們作為志愿者參加了殘奧會（The Paralympics）服務(wù)工作，請根據(jù)以下表格中的信息，敘述你們這次活動的全過程及感受。

時間	活動內(nèi)容
早晨7：20	鳥巢國家體育場集合
上午7：30	進入鳥巢，打掃衛(wèi)生
上午9：00----下午4：00	1、幫助殘疾運動員作賽前準(zhǔn)備 2、引導(dǎo)觀眾尋找座位 3、維持秩序
中午12：00----下午1：00	午餐、休息
下午4：00	活動結(jié)束，感受深刻

Answer 1

My classmates and I worked as volunteers in Beijing Paralympics on September 13.

Early in the morning at 7:20, we gathered at the National Stadium, the Bird Nest. As soon as we got into it at 7:30, we started to do some cleaning. From 9:00 am to 4:00 pm, we tried our best to help the disabled athletes to get ready for their competitors, lead the audience to their seats and keep order. It was not until 12:00 that we had lunch and took a rest, which lasted about an hour. We stopped working at 4:00.

Though it was a tiring job, we felt it an honor to serve the disabled friends from all over the world.

解析:

文筆要非常流暢，要把握所有要點，同時以“我”為中心，詳細說明自己對志愿者工作的理解，以此來表達自己的決心。要用詞恰當(dāng)，表現(xiàn)要比較充分，具備一定的說服力。詞匯和語句的運用要正確。