Question

2．為了放松心情和表達感激之情，在不考慮預(yù)算的情況下，你打算在高考結(jié)束之后邀請你的一位家人和你一起度過快樂的一天．請按要求用英語寫一篇短文，具體要求如下：
1．說明你會邀請誰和你度過這一天？為什么？
2．說明你會去哪里？做些什么事？為什么？
3．恰當?shù)慕Y(jié)尾
注意：
1．短文開頭已給出，不計入總數(shù)；
2．文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；
3．詞數(shù)：120左右
After the National College Entrance Examination is over，not worried about the budget，I am going to …After the National College Entrance Examination is over，not worried about the budget，I am going to share the chance with my mother to relax and express my appreciation，who has devoted herself to raising me until now．【高分句型一】For one thing，strictassheis，she neverfailsto show her care and consideration．For another，she has made me learn much knowledge never mentioned in my textbooks．（說明會邀請誰以及原因）
It is because of doing the heavy housework herself for long that she has been in poor health．Therefore，early in the morning，I will teach her to play Taiji in the nearest park，which will help her build up her body．Besides，considering she likes plants，I intend，after breakfast，to go to the botanic garden with her，where diverse kinds of plants and breathtaking scenes will certainly impress her．（說明計劃去的地點、將要去做的事以及這么做的原因）
In short，I sincerely hope that she will have a relaxed，happy day．（以自己的心愿來結(jié)尾）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型
1．For one thing，strict as she is，she never fails to show her care and consideration．
首先是因為，雖然她很嚴厲，但是她一直對我展示著她的關(guān)心和體貼．
strict as she is，as引導的讓步狀語從句，可將表語置于句首用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)．
2．I intend，after breakfast，to go to the botanic garden with her，where diverse kinds of plants and breathtaking scenes will certainly impress her．
早餐后，我打算和她一起去花園，花園里各種不同的植物和令人激動的美景一定會給她留下深刻的印象的．
where diverse kinds of plants…where引導的定語從句，用于對先行詞botanic garden 做進一步的補充說明．

解答 After the National College Entrance Examination is over，not worried about the budget，I am going to share the chance with my mother to relax and express my appreciation，who has devoted herself to raising me until now．【高分句型一】For one thing，strict as she is，she never fails to show her care and consideration．For another，she has made me learn much knowledge never mentioned in my textbooks．（說明會邀請誰以及原因）
It is because of doing the heavy housework herself for long that she has been in poor health．Therefore，early in the morning，I will teach her to play Taiji in the nearest park，which will help her build up her body．Besides，considering she likes plants，I intend，after breakfast，to go to the botanic garden with her，where diverse kinds of plants and breathtaking scenes will certainly impress her．（說明計劃去的地點、將要去做的事以及這么做的原因）
In short，I sincerely hope that she will have a relaxed，happy day．（以自己的心愿來結(jié)尾）

點評 考生在寫作時，感情真摯，原因分析到位，令人信服，固定搭配、時態(tài)與語態(tài)的使用熟練．考生在平時應(yīng)加強相關(guān)詞匯、固定搭配的積累．