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16．假設(shè)你叫王平．為響應(yīng)國(guó)家厲行節(jié)約的號(hào)召，請(qǐng)你以"厲行節(jié)約--為資源、為環(huán)保"為 題，向某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社編輯寫信，表達(dá)你對(duì)厲行節(jié)約的看法．該英文信應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：
1．節(jié)約與資源的關(guān)系；
2．節(jié)約與環(huán)保的關(guān)系；
3．舉例說(shuō)明中學(xué)生該如何厲行節(jié)約；
4．倡導(dǎo)社會(huì)保持節(jié)約的優(yōu)良傳統(tǒng)．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：120字左右；
2、全文不得體現(xiàn)出人的真實(shí)姓名．
Dear editor，
I'm Wang Ping．I'm writing to offer your newspaper an article Trying to Save Both for Natural Resources and the Environment．
Saving is very important because natural resources in our world may run out one day，so we should save some for our offspring．Meanwhile，saving can help us avoid producing waste，which will make our homeland more beautiful．As students，we should make our contributions．For example，we can recycle our textbooks or use both sides of our exercise books．In this way more trees would be saved．What's more，we Chinese have a good tradition of saving and regard wasting as a shame，so we call for everybody's action to save what we can to make our beautiful life last forever．
Best wishes
Yours sincerely．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇話題類作文．假設(shè)你叫王平．為響應(yīng)國(guó)家厲行節(jié)約的號(hào)召，請(qǐng)你以"厲行節(jié)約--為資源、為環(huán)保"為題，向某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社編輯寫信，表達(dá)你對(duì)厲行節(jié)約的看法．該英文信應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：1．節(jié)約與資源的關(guān)系；2．節(jié)約與環(huán)保的關(guān)系；3．舉例說(shuō)明中學(xué)生該如何厲行節(jié)約；4．倡導(dǎo)社會(huì)保持節(jié)約的優(yōu)良傳統(tǒng)．需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題．一定要給出自己的看法．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句型：
run out 耗盡
offspring 后代子孫
regard…as…把…當(dāng)作…
Saving is very important because natural resources in our world may run out one day，so we should save some for our offspring．
句中saving是動(dòng)名詞作主語(yǔ)；because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
saving can help us avoid producing waste，which will make our homeland more beautiful．
句中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句．
so we call for everybody's action to save what we can to make our beautiful life last forever．
句中what引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Dear editor，
I'm Wang Ping．I'm writing to offer your newspaper an article Trying to Save Both for Natural Resources and the Environment．（表達(dá)目的）
Saving is very important because natural resources in our world may run out one day，so we should save some for our offspring．（高分句型一）Meanwhile，saving can help us avoid producing waste，which will make our homeland more beautiful．（高分句型二）As students，we should make our contributions．For example，we can recycle our textbooks or use both sides of our exercise books．In this way more trees would be saved．What's more，we Chinese have a good tradition of saving and regard wasting as a shame，so we call for everybody's action to save what we can to make our beautiful life last forever．（高分句型三）（寫作要點(diǎn)）
Best wishes
Yours sincerely

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書面表達(dá)題考查的是英語(yǔ)的應(yīng)用能力．寫作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語(yǔ)和句型要寫對(duì)；過(guò)渡詞和過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．