Question

7．在一些地方，人們砍伐樹木一擴(kuò)大耕地，導(dǎo)致一些動(dòng)物沒有了棲息地；而且，人們大量使用農(nóng)藥，威脅一些動(dòng)物的生命；有的人為了賺錢，獵殺珍稀野生動(dòng)物，結(jié)果，導(dǎo)致了野生動(dòng)物不斷減少，甚至滅絕．
   請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上信息給報(bào)社寫一封信，談?wù)勅绾伪Ｗo(hù)也生物．
   注意：1．詞數(shù)：100左右；
         2．信的格式已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
     參考詞匯：農(nóng)藥pesticide    珍稀  rare
  Dear editor，
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                                                         Yours truly，
                                                            Wanglin．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于保護(hù)動(dòng)物的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點(diǎn)明書信目的；二描述動(dòng)物的悲慘現(xiàn)狀；三保護(hù)動(dòng)物的措施．
高分句型：
1．In some parts of our country，people cut down trees to enlarge the farmland，which causes some animals to lose their habitats．句子里which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，代指主句里提到的這件事．
在我國的一些地方，人們砍伐樹木一擴(kuò)大耕地，導(dǎo)致一些動(dòng)物沒有了棲息地．
2．In my opinion，it's time that we took immediate measures to protect wild animals．句子里In my opinion表示"依我看來"； it's time that 表示"該做某事了"，從句的謂語動(dòng)詞用did；take  measures to 表示"采取措施做某事"．
依我看來，我們應(yīng)該立刻采取措施來保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物．

解答 Dear editor，
Here I write to tell you something about what I see in some places．（點(diǎn)明書信目的）
In some parts of our country，people cut down trees to enlarge the farmland，which causes some animals to lose their habitats．【高分句型一】Besides，farmers use too much pesticide，and this can do great harm to animals．In addition，some people hunt rare wild animals so that they can earn money．As a result，the number wild animals is becoming smaller and smaller．Some of them are even dying out．（描述動(dòng)物的悲慘現(xiàn)狀）
In my opinion，it's time that we took immediate measures to protect wild animals．【高分句型二】We should't cut down trees without permission．Instead we should plant more trees to protect the wild animals'living conditions．（保護(hù)動(dòng)物的措施）
                                                                                                                                Yours truly，

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查開放類作文．
高考寫作文時(shí)，我們要緊扣規(guī)范的句型句式，避免華麗句，漢化句，魯莽句，非法句以及無把握句，應(yīng)該以穩(wěn)妥為主．不過平時(shí)可以多做嘗試，以使自己的寫作能力得以提高．例如要多對(duì)定語從句，名詞性從句已經(jīng)非謂語動(dòng)詞的利用．