假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：把缺詞處加一個(gè)漏符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.

I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.

 

1.holding 變成hold

2.passes 變成passed

3.much 變成well/clearly

4.shoulder 變成shoulders

5.toward 變成 to/into

6.himself 變成him

7.he 前加and

8.a去掉

9.during 變成when

10.never 變成 ever

【解析】

1. 變成hold 考查動(dòng)詞用法。此處used to意為：過去常常，to是不定式符號(hào)。故用動(dòng)詞原形

2. 變成passed 考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)前面的I was only four可知，用一般過去時(shí)。

3. 變成well/clearly 考查副詞。根據(jù)句意可知，我很清楚地記得我的爺爺。此處very much是多的意思，不合題意

4. 變成shoulders 考查名詞的復(fù)數(shù)。根據(jù)常理“人有兩個(gè)肩膀”。所以，用復(fù)數(shù)形式

5. 變成 to/into 考查介詞。根據(jù)句意可知，這里指：黑胡子變成了白胡子。所以，用turn to或into的形式

6. himself 變成him 考查代詞。句意：他的深沉的聲音把他和別人區(qū)別開來。所以，用him。

7. he 前加and 考查連詞。根據(jù)句中結(jié)構(gòu)可知He had a deep voice, （which set him apart from others in our small town,）和he was strong and powerful.是并列關(guān)系。所以，用and連接起來。

8. a去掉 考查固定短語。根據(jù)固定短語in fact可知，去掉a

9. 變成when 考查連詞。根據(jù)they came over to play or do homework with me.是句子，所以，用連詞when，during是介詞，不能連接狀語從句

10. 變成 ever 考查副詞。根據(jù)句意：他是我認(rèn)識(shí)的最溫柔的人。可知將never改為ever。這是語意錯(cuò)誤。

考點(diǎn)：短文改錯(cuò)。

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