Question

請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語寫一篇短文。
You may talk a lot in life, but you must learn to listen.
注意：
①無須寫標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語提示語；
②除詩歌外，文體不限；
③文中不得透露個人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
④詞數(shù)為120左右。

Answer 1

Have you ever noticed that we have only one mouth but two ears? Some people say that is because the God hopes that we can learn to listen to others more.
I still remember that once my best friend made a promise that she would come to my birthday party. To my great disappointment, she didn’t show up. She later tried to explain what had happened to her, but I refused to listen. There came some misunderstanding between her and me. I thought she didn’t value our friendship at all and just found excuse for her absence. But later, another friend told me that on her way to my party, she met an old man who lost the way home. She had great difficulty in helping the old man getting back home, so she missed my party. Now I felt it a pity that I hadn’t listened to her with my heart. It was until then that I realized the importance of listening.
My experience tells me that it is important to learn to listen. It is listening that can remove much misunderstanding.

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點(diǎn)組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點(diǎn)的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文用了一些常見的短語：To my great disappointment,使我失望的是，show up出現(xiàn)，. had great difficulty in helping 句式也富有變化：Some people say that is because the God hopes that we can learn to listen to others more.這句話用了表語從句， I still remember that once my best friend made a promise that she would come to my birthday party.這句話用了同位語從句， She later tried to explain what had happened to her, but I refused to listen. 這句話用了賓語從句，There came some misunderstanding between her and me.這句話用了倒裝句， another friend told me that on her way to my party, she met an old man who lost the way home. 這句話用Leeds定語從句， Now I felt it a pity that I hadn’t listened to her with my heart. 這句話用了it做形式賓語，It was until then that I realized the importance of listening.這句話用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句。