Question

15．閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要．
Punishing children is a controversial topic．Everybody has different opinions about how to act to correct a child's behavior．Parents，teachers，doctors and specialists such as psychologists，have disagreements about whether it is good for a child's education to punish him or her．
The word"punish"means different things to different people．Punishment can be physical or emotional．Physical punishment is when the parent hits，slaps or spanks the child．
On the other hand，emotional punishment is when the parent，in order to educate the child，doesn't let him or her watch TV，go to play with his or her friends，or do things like that．The parent doesn't teach him or her，but still he or she punishes the child．
Although many surveys and studies have been made about what the correct way is to raise a child，nobody has the answer or the truth．I think it will be very difficult to find the answer or get people to agree．
I think the parents should love their child and give him or her the best education，but at the same time，they should punish the child if he or she deserves it．I think if you love your child，you should be rational when you apply the punishment．It should be reasonable but strict．
The parents'goal is to have in the future a good man or woman in society，so sometimes you should do what is necessary to get your child to behave well．
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Answer 1

分析 本篇短文主要介紹了關于懲罰孩子的內(nèi)容．在概括短文時注意要把要點都概括完全，例如人們對懲罰孩子的看法，懲罰分為生理和心理的，怎樣正確教育孩子，還有作者自己的看法．注意使用適當?shù)倪B接詞把這些觀點連接起來，構成概要．重要短語：
 As a matter of fact，事實上
高分句子：
Proper punishment can be instructive and necessary to children if it is reasonable and strict．，本句中含有if引導的條件狀語從句．

解答 People have mixed opinions towards punishment to children．（要點1）Punishment can be physical or emotional，but the way they are punished is the key problem．（要點2）As a matter of fact，it is difficult to find the correct way to raise a child．（要點3）Proper punishment can be instructive and necessary to children if it is reasonable and strict．（高分句型）But love and education are the most important for us to make our kids behave well．（要點4）

點評 概要寫作的基礎是理解語篇，而讀懂語篇的基礎是詞匯，尤其是對關鍵詞匯的掌握與運用．在此基礎上，綜合運用語法與句法結構，按照行文邏輯組織語言，形成概要．