Question

假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)的李華，將參加主題為"Let's Ride Bicycles"的英語演講比賽。請撰寫一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：

1．目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題；

2．騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康等。

參考詞匯：低碳生活（low-carbon life）；節(jié)能（energy saving）交通堵塞（traffic jams）

注意：

1．詞數(shù)：120詞左右；

2．演講稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，請將其抄寫在答題卡上且該部分不計入總詞數(shù)。

Good morning, everyone,

I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School．The topic of my speech is "Let's Ride Bicycles"．

Thank you.

Answer 1

Good morning, everyone,

I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School．The topic of my speech is "Let's Ride Bicycles"．

As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.

How can we solve the problems then? As far as I’m convened, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy – saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.

Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!

Thank you!

【解析】這是一篇演講稿寫作。演講稿要求論點鮮明，邏輯性強，富有特點；要求活用各類修辭手法，使講稿具有較強感染力。文章主題是呼吁大家騎自行車節(jié)能減排，首先論述汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通問題，然后給出騎自行車的益處。適當增加內(nèi)容保持行文流暢，注意格式。文章第二段開頭描述了如今因為經(jīng)濟發(fā)展，汽車已經(jīng)成為我們?nèi)粘Ｉ�活中較為普遍的交通方式這一現(xiàn)象，這給我們的生活帶來了極大的方便。然后話鋒一轉(zhuǎn)，“however”，“然而”這種現(xiàn)象也帶來了一些問題。既然有問題就要解決，引出接下來的一段，通過轉(zhuǎn)變交通方式來解決這些問題。第三段開頭用一個疑問句，有利于增強感染力，吸引聽眾注意力。然后As far as I’m convened, riding bicycles is a good solution.直接給出主題，騎自行車是個很好的解決辦法。然后列出三點騎自行車的益處，“for one thing”“for another”“what’s more”。最后一段，總結(jié)主題，呼吁大家承擔起建設(shè)低碳城市的責(zé)任，從騎自行車節(jié)能減排開始。Come on and join us，簡潔有力。最后，注意格式。總結(jié)：語言簡潔有力，富有感染力，條理清晰。

考點：考查演講稿寫作