Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下任務(wù)說(shuō)明和寫作要求,寫一篇幅150詞左右的英文短文。
Self – discipline （自律）
An elderly carpenter （木匠）was ready to retire. He told his employer his plans to leave the house building business and live a more leisurely （悠閑的） life with his wife. The employer was sorry to see his good worker go and asked if he could build just one more house as a personal favor. The carpenter said yes, but in time it was easy to see that his heart was not in his work. He built the house carelessly and used inferior (較差的) materials. It was an unfortunate way to end his career （職業(yè)）. When the carpenter finished his work and the employer came to inspect （視察）the house and handed the front-door key to the carpenter. "This is your house," he said, "my gift to you."
What a shock! What a shame! If he had only known he was building his own house, he would have done it all so differently. Now he had to live in the home he had built none too well.
So it is with us. Think of yourself as the carpenter. Build wisely. It is the only life you will ever build. Your life tomorrow will be the result of your attitudes and the choices you make today.
1．以約30個(gè)詞概括本文的故事；
2．以約120個(gè)詞寫一篇短文，包括如下要點(diǎn):
（1）你讀短文后的感想；
（2）敘述你的一次真實(shí)或虛構(gòu)的對(duì)某一件事高度自律或負(fù)責(zé)的經(jīng)歷；
（3）那次高度自律或負(fù)責(zé)的經(jīng)歷對(duì)你的影響。
1．文中可使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，可也以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2．信中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

Answer 1

When a carpenter was building the last house before retiring, he was absent-minded and did not take it seriously. But finally his employer gave the house to him, which made him regretful. 
I firmly believe that self-discipline matters a lot for success. As the saying goes, the first and best victory is to conquer the self. Life is a continuous process of fighting and one can not achieve success without self-discipline.
I once took part in a summer camp. At the end of the camp, everyone was so tired that they left the camp with lots of rubbish. However, I stayed behind to help the trainers clean the rubbish. To my great surprise, I was told that cleaning the rubbish was the last test of the camp, so I was the only one who was announced qualified.
The experience makes a big difference to my studies and life. I think self-discipline is an important factor in my learning English well. Therefore, do not let a lack of self-discipline be an obstacle to your success.

解析試題分析：這篇書面表達(dá)給了一段材料：先要求以約30個(gè)詞概括本文的故事，再以約120個(gè)詞寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：（1）你讀短文后的感想；（2）敘述你的一次真實(shí)或虛構(gòu)的對(duì)某一件事高度自律或負(fù)責(zé)的經(jīng)歷；（3）那次高度自律或負(fù)責(zé)的經(jīng)歷對(duì)你的影響。這道題目要求比較嚴(yán)格，所以在寫作之前一定要看清題目。題目還要求你可以使用實(shí)例或其它論述方法支持你的論點(diǎn)，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不要抄襲閱讀材料中的句子。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作時(shí)盡量使用自己會(huì)的單詞、詞組和句型，同時(shí)也要注意使用一些高級(jí)語(yǔ)法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
考點(diǎn)：考查讀寫任務(wù)作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于根據(jù)原文內(nèi)容寫作，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。認(rèn)真看清題目要求，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。