Question

【題目】假定你是李華。你的筆友林濤來(lái)信說(shuō)，因?qū)W習(xí)忙、鍛煉少，最近經(jīng)常生病，影響學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一封英文回信。

要點(diǎn)包括：

1.鍛煉的重要性；

2.鍛煉有利學(xué)習(xí)；

3.提出鍛煉建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3.信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好。

Dear Lin Tao,

Sorry to hear that you have been sick for days and hope you are better now.

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Lin Tao,

Sorry to hear that you have been sick for days and hope you are better now. You have studied so hard that you have had no time to do any exercise, which does harm to your physical and mental health. It would be of great benefit to your health if you could squeeze some time to take more exercise in future, for example, jogging and playing basketball.

Time spent in exercise is wasted. Actually, exercise can improve your physical conditions and ease your mind. Only when you are in good health can you carry on studying and increase your study efficiency.

Therefore, I suggested that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day. I would be very pleased to see you have a stronger body.

Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一封書(shū)信。你的筆友林濤來(lái)信說(shuō)，因?qū)W習(xí)忙、鍛煉少，最近經(jīng)常生病，影響學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一封英文回信。要點(diǎn)包括：鍛煉的重要性；鍛煉有利學(xué)習(xí)；提出鍛煉建議。寫(xiě)好此文，需注意三點(diǎn)：一是寫(xiě)信格式要準(zhǔn)確，信的開(kāi)頭已經(jīng)給出，但切要寫(xiě)好信的結(jié)尾。二是要詳略得當(dāng)。三要注意適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié)，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過(guò)渡詞，以使行文連貫。另外，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本文是一封書(shū)信，格式正確，內(nèi)容齊全，要點(diǎn)突出，文章布局合理，文中使用高級(jí)句子。You have studied so hard that you have had no time to do any exercise, which does harm to your physical and mental health.句中so---that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句，并使用which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；It would be of great benefit to your health if you could squeeze some time to take more exercise in future,句中if引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句；Time spent in exercise is wasted.過(guò)去分詞做后置定語(yǔ)；Only when you are in good health can you carry on studying and increase your study efficiency.部分倒裝堪稱經(jīng)典；I suggested that you take at least one hour’s exercise every day.賓語(yǔ)從句中的省略should的虛擬語(yǔ)氣甚是巧妙。