分析 這是一篇開放式作文,寫作時(shí)不僅僅對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯,而是要添加些內(nèi)容,使文章看起來更充實(shí),要組成一篇通順連貫的短文.需要注意緊扣文章主題,給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括,缺一不可.寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài),上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系,一定要契合給出的開頭,不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題.
亮點(diǎn)句型一:students can learn to deal with success and failure through competition in the sports meeting,thus encouraging them to push themselves hard in their studies.學(xué)生可以通過在運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)的比賽中學(xué)會(huì)成功和失敗,從而鼓勵(lì)他們?cè)趯W(xué)習(xí)中努力學(xué)習(xí).本句中用非謂語動(dòng)詞中的現(xiàn)在分詞在句中做狀語,encouraging them to push themselves hard in their studies.
亮點(diǎn)句型二:Besides,taking part in the sports meeting,they think,will have a negative effect on their studies.此外,他們認(rèn)為參加運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)對(duì)他們的學(xué)習(xí)會(huì)產(chǎn)生負(fù)面影響.本句中非謂語動(dòng)詞中的動(dòng)名詞做主語 taking part in the sports meeting.
解答 Some people like sport while others not in our life.Recently,our school conducted a survey about whether the school should hold a sports meeting or not,students'opinions are divided on the topic.
80%of the students think sport does them good.First of all,sport helps them build up their strength,keeping them healthy.In addition,it helps develop students'ability to cooperate with each other.Plus,students can learn to deal with success and failure through competition in the sports meeting,thus encouraging them to push themselves hard in their studies.(亮點(diǎn)句型一)
However,20% of them hold the opposite view,arguing that sport is not the only way to keep healthy.What's worse,some of them might get injured in the sports meeting.Besides,taking part in the sports meeting,they think,will have a negative effect on their studies.(亮點(diǎn)句型二)
As far as I'm concerned,it's a good choice to hold a sports meeting.For one thing,we can develop team spirit by participating in sports and games.For another,it's a good way of relaxing ourselves,making our school life colorful.
點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題,并有部分的文字提示.給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大.對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高,要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力.在完成開放性作文時(shí),首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型,在你的能力范圍之內(nèi),選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化,因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭.同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體,在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候,可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采,也能增加得高分的可能性.
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