Question

3．假定你是李華．你在校英文報上看到了一則招聘啟事．
A Research Assistant Wanted
Our university in the countryside is looking for a research assistant．Candidates must have strong computing skills．Ideally suits a graduate from computing fields．
Contact Albert Lee at Lee@Yahoo．com for application or for more information．
請閱讀啟事并寫一封應征郵件．內(nèi)容要點如下：
1）陳述應征原因；
2）說明應征相關經(jīng)驗；
3）被聘用后的決心．
注意：1）詞數(shù)100左右；
2）可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3）開頭和結尾已為你寫好．
Dear Ms Lee，
I have learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a research assistant．（高分句型一）I believe I can do the job well，so I'd like to apply for it．
I'm Li Hua，a boy aged 18，and I have just graduatedfrom high school．I've been very interested in computer，so my computer teacher used to ask me to help him in class．（高分句型二）Besides，I was chosen to take part in a computer design competition．Luckily our group took the first place in it．Hard working and energetic，I shall be a freshman of computer science．（高分句型三）Thus，I'm convince that I'm qualified for the job．
Once hired，I would be very grateful and I would devote myself to the post．（高分句型四）
I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你在校英文報上看到了一則招聘啟事，閱讀啟事并寫一封應征郵件，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：1）陳述應征原因；2）說明應征相關經(jīng)驗；3）被聘用后的決心．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：in need of急需；apply for申請；graduate from從…畢業(yè)；be interested in對…感興趣；used to do過去常常；Besides另外；take part in 參加；take the first place 取得第一名；Thus因此；devote oneself to致力于；
I have learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a research assistant．（高分句型一）
I've been very interested in computer，so my computer teacher used to ask me to help him in class．（高分句型二）
Hard working and energetic，I shall be a freshman of computer science．（高分句型三）
Once hired，I would be very grateful and I would devote myself to the post．（高分句型四）

解答 Dear Ms Lee，
      I have learned from your advertisement that you are in need of a research assistant．（高分句型一）I believe I can do the job well，so I'd like to apply for it．
      I'm Li Hua，a boy aged 18，and I have just graduated from high school．I've been very interested in computer，so my computer teacher used to ask me to help him in class．（高分句型二）Besides，I was chosen to take part in a computer design competition．Luckily our group took the first place in it．Hard working and energetic，I shall be a freshman of computer science．（高分句型三）Thus，I'm convince that I'm qualified for the job．
      Once hired，I would be very grateful and I would devote myself to the post．（高分句型四）
      I'm looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．