Question

2009年6月，江蘇省教育廳做出決定：嚴(yán)禁中小學(xué)暑假和雙休日補(bǔ)課。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要求，用英語報(bào)寫一篇文章。
要求：1. 聽到這一決定時(shí)你的想法（兩點(diǎn)）。
2. 你家人對(duì)這一決定的反應(yīng)。
3. 簡(jiǎn)述你今年暑期的安排（包括學(xué)習(xí)方面、身體鍛煉、其他活動(dòng)等）和收獲。
注意：1. 對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，結(jié)合事實(shí)闡述自己的認(rèn)識(shí)。
2. 詞數(shù)120左右。開頭已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。
參考詞匯： 高考本科分?jǐn)?shù)線  the required score in gaokao
In June, 2009, the Education Department of Jiangsu Province made a decision that giving lessons during the summer vacation and weekends should be banned.
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Answer 1

In June, 2009, the Education Department of Jiangsu Province made a decision that giving lessons during the summer vacation and weekends should be banned.
I think it quite correct. This is an important measure for the quality-oriented education. As is well known to all, in order to raise the number of students to meet the required score in gaokao, almost all high schools gave lessons during the holidays. We students suffered a lot both physically and mentally.
However, my parents felt worried, and they complained, “Now that the present system of the college entrance exam hasn’t changed, can you cope with the fierce competition without extra lessons and enough exercise?”
Believe it or not, no summer vacation has been so meaningful to me as that of this year. Every day, I spent several hours going over my lessons. I also had time to relax and enjoy my hobbies. I went swimming, watched interesting programs on TV, did some reading and met my friends. In addition, I participated in community work and this has raised my awareness of public service. I really enjoyed my vacation.

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