【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。作文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏子符號(hào)（∧）并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Jack,

How is everything going recently? I’m writing to tell you something more about my birthday. The other day we hold a party to celebrate my 18th birthday. I received many presents from my friends and parents, including cards, books, CDs or so on. During the party we sang and danced, having good time. I thanked my friends for his help and company. At the meantime, I showed my sincere appreciation to my parents for bringing me up. Now I grow up, that means I should shoulder more responsibilities. I’ll try my best to share more houseworks to reduce their burden. It’s high time that I do something to repay them.

How did you celebrate your 18th birthday? I’m looking forward to hear from you soon.

Yours Sincerely

Li Jin

【答案】

【1】刪除more

【2】hold改為held

【3】or改為and

【4】having后加a

【5】his改為their

【6】At改為In

【7】that改為which

【8】houseworks改為housework

【9】do改為did或do前加 should

【10】hear改為hearing

【解析】

試題分析：本文中作者敘述了自己的生日聚會(huì)的有關(guān)情況。

【1】刪除more 考查上下文。本句為文章開(kāi)始的句子，之前并沒(méi)有提到關(guān)于生日的事情，所以more沒(méi)有上下文的語(yǔ)境串聯(lián)。

【2】hold改為held 考查時(shí)態(tài)。本句的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)是the other day前幾天，這是一般過(guò)去時(shí)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)，所以本句也應(yīng)該使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。

【3】or改為and 考查固定搭配。短語(yǔ)and so on等等。句意：從我的朋友和父母親那里我收到了很多禮物，包括卡片、書(shū)、CD等等。

【4】having后加a 考查固定搭配。固定短語(yǔ)have a good time玩的開(kāi)心。句意：在聚會(huì)的時(shí)候，我們唱歌跳舞，玩的很開(kāi)心。

【5】his改為their 考查代詞。本句中their指代前面的my friends。句意：因?yàn)榕笥褌兊膸椭团惆椋蚁蛩麄儽硎玖烁兄x。

【6】At改為In 考查固定搭配。短語(yǔ)in the meantime同時(shí)。句意：同時(shí)，我向父母親表示了真誠(chéng)的感謝，感謝他們養(yǎng)育了我。

【7】that改為which 考查非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。在英語(yǔ)中不能使用that引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，本句中which指代前面一句話的內(nèi)容，在定語(yǔ)從句中充當(dāng)主語(yǔ)。

【8】houseworks改為housework 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。名詞housework家務(wù)，這是一個(gè)不可數(shù)名詞，沒(méi)有復(fù)數(shù)形式。

【9】do改為did或do前加 should 考查虛擬語(yǔ)氣。句式It is time that sb did/should do sth是某人做某事的時(shí)候了。句中可以使用過(guò)去時(shí)，也可以使用should+動(dòng)詞原形，should不能省略。

【10】hear改為hearing 考查動(dòng)名詞。短語(yǔ)look forward to期待，其中的to是介詞，后面要接動(dòng)名詞做賓語(yǔ)。

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