Question

你校英文報欲征集有關(guān)學習習慣的小短文。 請以“My study habits”為題，寫一篇英語短文。短文應包括以下要點：
概述： 學習習慣的重要性
你的良好的學習習慣：有計劃，善思考，勤總結(jié)（sum up）；會用工具書，善用機會和資源（resources）；勞逸結(jié)合。
好的學習習慣對成功是很重要的。(號召同學們行動起來)
注意：1. 詞數(shù)：不少于120 詞；
2. 文章必須包括所有要點，行文連貫，詞數(shù)可適當增減。

Answer 1

My study habits
Study habits play a decisive role in the effect of learning. Usually a student with good study habits get twice the result with half the efforts. Therefore, it is important that we should form good habits when we study.
There is no doubt that making a suitable timetable is the first necessary pace in order to divide the time into a few parts well , so I always make a schedule for study. Moreover, whichever subjects you study, thinking is a most important factor rather than just direct reciting, which is useless. So I develop the habit of thinking and solving problems with the help of reference books, for example, a dictionary. Still, I learn to sum up what has been learned, seize every chance to learn and make use of all kinds of learning resources.
Remember that good study habits are important to success.

試題分析：考查提綱式作文：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性。考生必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。
【亮點說明】這篇范文要點全面，句式富有變化：it is important that we should form good habits when we study.這句話用了it做形式主語， There is no doubt that making a suitable timetable is the first necessary pace in order to divide the time into a few parts well , so I always make a schedule for study.這句話用了同位語從句，不定式做目的狀語，和結(jié)果狀語從句， whichever subjects you study, thinking is a most important factor rather than just direct reciting, which is useless. 這句話用了讓步狀語從句和定語從句，So I develop the habit of thinking and solving problems with the help of reference books, 主句用了詞組：develop the habit of和with the help of在…的幫助下，I learn to sum up what has been learned, seize every chance to learn and make use of all kinds of learning resources. 這句話用了what引導的賓語從句，還有文章還使用了 Therefore, Moreover, or example, Still,這樣的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，使文章更加連貫。