Question

15．昨天我校邀請知名校友李先生為高三學生作報告，請你根據(jù)以下要點為我校英文期刊Shoots寫一篇100字左右的報道：
1．校友回憶在我校學習的經(jīng)歷；
2．校友的成功及對母校的感激；
3．自己聽報告后的感想．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加情節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭語已為你寫好．
Yesterday we invited Mr．Li，a famous scholar and schoolmate of our school，to give a speech to us Senior 3 students．All of us felt deeply touched by his lecture and proud of our distinguished schoolmate．
Mr．Li once studied in this same school many years ago and later he went to a famous university in the North．（高分句型一）After graduation，he devoted his life to teaching in the rural areas of our country for more than 30 years．His devotion and selflessness are highly thought of by all his students as well as by the society．（高分句型二）Meanwhile，he donated many books to our school and showed deep affection to his former teachers and his high school．
As a senior high school student，I'm determined to learn from Mr．Li and become a worthwhile schoolmate of our school．（高分句型三）．

Answer 1

分析 析題干可知，全文為一般過去時．
報道主要分三部分：
①首先，用一句話作為導(dǎo)語寫出主要事件，即說明昨天我們邀請了李先生來我們學校給大三學生做了報告．
distinguished 著名的；give a speech 發(fā)表演講，做報告．
②其次，介紹李先生的事跡．
devote one's life to doing 奉獻某人的一生…，as well as 和，be highly thought of 高度評價．
③最后，總結(jié)自己的收獲．
be determined to do sth．下定決心做某事．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be touched by被…所感動；be proud of因為…而自豪； be highly thought of被高度評價；as well as 也，和；Meanwhile同時；
Mr．Li once studied in this same school many years ago and later he went to a famous university in the North．（高分句型一）
His devotion and selflessness are highly thought of by all his students as well as by the society．（高分句型二）
 As a senior high school student，I'm determined to learn from Mr．Li and become a worthwhile schoolmate of our school．（高分句型三）

解答 Yesterday we invited Mr．Li，a famous scholar and schoolmate of our school to give a speech to us Senior 3 students．All of us felt deeply touched by his lecture and proud of our distinguished schoolmate．
       Mr．Li once studied in this same school many years ago and later he went to a famous university in the North．（高分句型一）After graduation，he devoted his life to teaching in the rural areas of our country for more than 30 years．His devotion and selflessness are highly thought of by all his students as well as by the society．（高分句型二）Meanwhile，he donated many books to our school and showed deep affection to his former teachers and his high school．
       As a senior high school student，I'm determined to learn from Mr．Li and become a worthwhile schoolmate of our school．（高分句型三）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．