Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你準備明年高考后去英國某大學(xué)留學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)英國文學(xué)，需要填寫 UCAS(Universities and Colleges Admissions Service) 申請材料。請按照提示完成你的個人自薦信息。

1．告知你選擇的專業(yè)并說明理由；

2．介紹自己的業(yè)余愛好及特長。

注意：詞數(shù)100左右�？梢赃m當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir／Madam，

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madam,

After careful consideration and investigation, I think your college is an ideal place for my college education, where I want to major in English literature. I’m obsessed with English literature due to its long history and a long list of world-famous writers. I’m sure I can get along well with it because English is my favorite subject in high school, which will be helpful for my further study in college.

As to my hobbies, I’m a keen basketball fan and I play a lot of it at school. What’s more, I’m crazy about rock music and my dream is to found a rock group. I hope my dream will come true in college.

I am looking forward to receiving your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇電子郵件的書面表達。題目中已給出了稱呼和落款，所以只需要按照題目所要求的內(nèi)容寫就行，所選的專業(yè)要寫自己會用英語翻譯的專業(yè)，然后根據(jù)專業(yè)來展開寫作。

亮點說明：本文長句的使用占了本文一半的篇幅，使得文章精煉簡潔，顯示出考生的獨具匠心例如I think your college is an ideal place for my college education, where I want to major in English literature.運用了think引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和where引導(dǎo)的定語從句；I’m sure I can get along well with it because English is my favorite subject in high school, which will be helpful for my further study in college用了I’m sure that句型、because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句以及which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句等；還運用了一下比較好的詞匯和短語，如be obsessed with：癡迷于；due to， keen等；一些連詞的使用使得文章連貫，如As to，What’s more。