16.假如英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同學(xué)們交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文.文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤,要求你在錯(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞.增加:在缺詞處寫(xiě)一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)( 。谄湎旅鎸(xiě)上該加的詞.刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,在該詞下面寫(xiě)上修改后的詞.注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
Last Saturday I went to the library as usually.At about noon,I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help.I went up to see what was happened I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything.Without any hesitation,I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat,but jumped into the water quickly.I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety.To his great relief,the kid was saved.
I was proud what I had done.I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.

分析 本文講述了作者見(jiàn)義勇為的事情.上個(gè)周末作者在一個(gè)湖邊讀書(shū)的時(shí)候,忽然聽(tīng)到呼救的聲音,他發(fā)現(xiàn)遠(yuǎn)處一個(gè)小孩落水了,作者毫不猶豫地脫掉上衣,跳進(jìn)水里救出了小孩.作者為自己的表現(xiàn)感到驕傲,并且希望人們都能在別人需要的時(shí)候伸出援助之手.

解答 Last Saturday I went to the library as usually.At about noon,I was enjoying my reading near a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help.I went up to see what was happened I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything.Without any hesitation,I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat,but jumped into the water quickly.I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety.To his great relief,the kid was saved.
I was proud∧what I had done.I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else is in need.
詳解:
1.usually改為usual;考查固定搭配,as usual是固定短語(yǔ),意為"照例,像往常一樣".
2.while改為when;考查固定用法,be doing sth.when suddenly表示一件事正在進(jìn)行中突然發(fā)生了另外一件事,這里的when相當(dāng)于at that time,while沒(méi)有這個(gè)用法,故把while改為when.
3.hear改為heard;考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài),本文講的是上周末的事情,所以用過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài).
4.happened改為happening;考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài),結(jié)合語(yǔ)境分析此處應(yīng)該用happening,與was構(gòu)成過(guò)去進(jìn)行時(shí).
5.shocking改為shocked;考查分詞形式作形容詞,現(xiàn)在分詞作形容詞時(shí)修飾物,過(guò)去分詞作形容詞時(shí)修飾人,這里句子的主語(yǔ)是I,指人,所以用過(guò)去分詞作形容詞.
6.peoples改為people;考查名詞,people作為"民族"講時(shí)是可數(shù)名詞,作為"人,人們"講時(shí)是集體名詞,沒(méi)有復(fù)數(shù)形式,句中指"很多人",故用people.
7.去掉had;考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài),這里陳述過(guò)去的一個(gè)事實(shí),所以用一般過(guò)去時(shí).
8.but改為and;考查連詞,分析句子結(jié)構(gòu),作者"脫掉上衣,跳進(jìn)水里",這應(yīng)該是并列關(guān)系,故用and.
9.his改為my;考查形容詞性物主代詞,結(jié)合語(yǔ)境分析,這里應(yīng)是"使我欣慰的是…",所以把his改為my.
10.proud后面加of;考查介詞,be proud of是固定短語(yǔ),意為"以…為驕傲".

點(diǎn)評(píng) 整體理解短文,充分運(yùn)用所學(xué)的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí),包括一些實(shí)詞和虛詞的用法,固定短語(yǔ)搭配,習(xí)慣性用法,結(jié)合上下文整體關(guān)系,找出錯(cuò)誤并加以修正.

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