Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假定你是李華，貴校在學(xué)生中征集意見，詢問學(xué)生是否贊成開設(shè)iPad課堂（iPad classrooms）。你支持開設(shè)iPad名師點撥

短文改錯主要考查學(xué)生對冠詞、名詞、形容詞、副詞、固定搭配、主謂一致、同位語從句、被動語態(tài)、時態(tài)等語法知識的掌握情況。做短文改錯之前應(yīng)該首先確定全文的時態(tài)。眾所周知，情態(tài)動詞、助動詞和be動詞后跟動詞原形，所以帶be的固定搭配一定不要漏掉be。比如10小題，will后跟動詞原形，be proud of因---而自豪，故在will后加be。常見的這類詞組有be proud of因---而自豪；be pride in因---而自豪；be faced with面臨著---；be full of充滿了---；be filled with 被---填滿；be interested in 對---感興趣；be satisfied with 對---感到滿意。

考點：考查短文改錯

課堂；請給校長寫一封建議信，要點如下：

1. 資源豐富；

2. 促進(jìn)交流；

3. 利于環(huán)保；

4. 其他理由。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 開頭語已為你寫好。

Dear Headmaster,

We have been asked about our opinions on opening iPad classrooms.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Headmaster,

We have been asked about our opinions on opening iPad classrooms. I am in favor of this plan for the following reasons. To begin with, everyone learns differently. Students can customize their iPad with materials that fit their level and learning style, and thus tailor it to different needs. Moreover, when connected to the Internet, students can interact with teachers and classmates about what they learn more conveniently. For the sake of environmental protection, opening iPad classrooms is a good way to save trees that we have been cutting down for paper. Most importantly, I believe students will develop their interests in the subjects by enjoying a new way of learning.

I hope you would take my ideas into consideration and we look forward to attending an iPad class.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假定你是李華，貴校在學(xué)生中征集意見，詢問學(xué)生是否贊成開設(shè)iPad課堂（iPad classrooms）。你支持開設(shè)iPad課堂；請給校長寫一封建議信，要點如下：1. 資源豐富；2. 促進(jìn)交流；3. 利于環(huán)保；4. 其他理由。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3. 開頭語已為你寫好。

【亮點說明】

To begin with, everyone learns differently.句中使用動詞不定式的獨立成分；Students can customize their iPad with materials that fit their level and learning style, and thus tailor it to different needs.定語從句和并列句完美結(jié)合；Moreover, when connected to the Internet, students can interact with teachers and classmates about what they learn more conveniently.過去分詞作狀語和介詞的賓語從句巧妙用于同一句中；For the sake of environmental protection, opening iPad classrooms is a good way to save trees that we have been cutting down for paper.動名詞短語作主語，并在句中使用定語從句；I hope you would take my ideas into consideration and we look forward to attending an iPad class.句中運用賓語從句和并列句。