Question

10．假設(shè)你是李華，臨近高考了，你給初中英語老師Miss．Li寫一封感謝信，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1、感謝她給你的幫助；
2、你為高考做的準(zhǔn)備；
3、你對(duì)大學(xué)的展望以及上大學(xué)后的打算．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．開頭已為你寫好，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Miss Li，
Long time no see．Thank you for your kind help with my study．Time flies，I am senior three now，…
                                     

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，給初中英語老師Miss．Li寫一封感謝信．臨近高考，感謝Miss．Li給自己的幫助，并告知老師自己為高考做的準(zhǔn)備及打算．
寫作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主．
寫作要點(diǎn)：1．感謝她給你的幫助； 2．你為高考做的準(zhǔn)備；3．你對(duì)大學(xué)的展望以及上大學(xué)后的打算．
重要短語：be devoted to （致力于…），learn much knowledge （學(xué)習(xí)很多知識(shí)…），promise sb sth （舉行某事），be admitted into  （各種各樣），dream university（為某事而設(shè)計(jì)…），good equipment（特殊場(chǎng)合），learned professors（從…到…），offer sb sth（獲悉），be in difficulty（大飽眼福）．
【高分句型】
1．①Devoted to my study every day，I have learned much knowledge，②which will definitely promise me a good performance in my college entrance exams．
①此處是過去分詞短語"Devoted to"作原因狀語，主句為"I have learned much knowledge"，主句的主語為"I"與所給動(dòng)詞"devote"存在邏輯上的被動(dòng)關(guān)系，固定短語"sb be devoted to do 某人致力于…"
②此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，先行詞為"knowledge"，"which"在從句中作主語，指代前面先行詞．
2．I hope that I can be admitted into my dream university，one with good equipment and learned professors，who can offer me guidance when I am in difficulty．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，先行詞是"learned professors"，"who"在從句中作主語，指代前面的先行詞．

解答 Dear Miss Li，
Long time no see．Thank you for your kind help with my study．Time flies，I am Senior Three now．（感謝她給你的幫助）
Devoted to my study every day，I have learned much knowledge，which will definitely promise me a good performance in my college entrance exams．【高分句型】I hope that I can be admitted into my dream university，one with good equipment and learned professors，who can offer me guidance when I am in difficulty．【高分句型】（你為高考做的準(zhǔn)備） 
Of course，there will be exams in college to check my study．I won't bury myself in books the whole day．Instead，I'll be active and join many associations where I can develop my social skills and my potential．【高分句型】I firmly believe that only when I have a common ground can  I make my college life more colorful．【高分句型】（你對(duì)大學(xué)的展望以及上大學(xué)后的打算）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．