Question

假定你是李芳，你的美國好友Jane數(shù)學學得不好，對自己失去了信心，產(chǎn)生了厭學情緒。請你給她發(fā)一封電子郵件開導(dǎo)她，要點如下：

1．沒有必要過于傷心；

2．要振作起來，盡量減少焦慮心理：

3．和老師交流有助于你改善：

4．探索適合自己的有效學習方式。

注意：

l．詞數(shù)100左右：

2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Jane，

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Yours，

Li Fang

Answer 1

Dear Jane,

I am sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in maths and have lost interest in schoolwork. In my opinion, maths is difficult for most students, so there is no need to feel too bad. At this moment, you should cheer up and find ways to reduce your anxiety. Why not go on an outing with your friends or find time to listen to your favorite music? If you can talk to the teachers who you respect most, they may give you some practical advice that helps you to improve. Probably it’s time for you to explore a new learning method which is better and more suitable for you.

Anyway, I hope you can rebuild your self-confidence soon!

Yours,

Li Fang

【解析】

試題分析：本題考查電子郵件寫作，主要圍繞開導(dǎo)自己的好友，故郵件寫作時要注意語氣，要具有鼓舞性。題目要點已經(jīng)給出，注意不要漏掉要點。范文結(jié)構(gòu)為兩段式的分總結(jié)構(gòu)，第一段為開導(dǎo)和勸慰，第二段收束全文。第一段第一句中I am sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in 我很遺憾聽說….為全文奠定了一個感情基調(diào)，即帶有一種同情勸慰性的語氣；第二句中so there is no need to feel too bad.使用了there is no need to…沒有必要…的固定句式；第四句Why not go on an outing with your friends or find time to listen to your favorite music?使用了一個疑問句，使得文章十分富有感情；第五句If you can talk to the teachers who you respect most, they may give you some practical advice that helps you to improve. 使用了if領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句；最后一句Probably it’s time for you to explore a new learning method which is better and more suitable for you.使用了which領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的定語從句。在短語使用上，使用了do well 做得好，In my opinion 在我看來，At this moment 此時，cheer up 高興起來，it’s time to…是做…的時候等十分經(jīng)典的常用短語。在詞語使用上，本文詞語拿捏恰到好處，使得文章十分富有感情，如第一句I am sorry to hear that you 中sorry一詞的使用，以及最后一句I hope you can 中hope一詞的使用，極富勸慰性，可以說文章的語氣拿捏十分好，是文章最大亮點所在。總結(jié)：類似這類開導(dǎo)性勸慰性的郵件寫作時要注意語氣的拿捏，這會成為文章一大亮點。

考點：考查郵件寫作