Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

It was a bad night for Lewis, whose work had taken long than expected. It was late and he was tiring when driving home. He turned into his building’s parking lot, so all the spaces were full. He drove back onto the street, looked for a parking space. The next block were empty. He didn’t see the “No Parking” sign. He drove in, parked and hurrying home. The next morning he went back for his car. It was going. He telephoned the police to say his car had stolen. The police told him what it had happened: his car had been on a private parking lot and had been taken away by the police. Lewis had to pay 40 dollars to get her car back. In addition, he got a parking ticket.

Answer 1

1.long---longer

2.tiring--tired

3.so---but

4.looked---looking

5.were--was

6.hurrying---hurried

7.going--gone

8.had stolen--had been stolen

9.what it had happened去掉it

10.her--his

【解析】

試題分析：本文講述路易斯某一天晚上工作很晚才回家，結(jié)果大樓停車位已滿，便到另一個

街區(qū)停車。第二天卻發(fā)現(xiàn)車子不見了，向警察報案后結(jié)果發(fā)現(xiàn)因他的車停在了私人停車場而

被警察帶走了的故事。

1. work had taken long than expected，形容詞比較級+than表示比…更…，該句要表示比預期花的時間更久，故long---longer

2. was late and he was tiring ，tiring 是令人疲憊的，tired 意為感到疲憊的，本句要表達他感到疲憊，故tiring--tired

3. turned into his building’s parking lot, so all the spaces were full.前句表示他拐入他的大樓停車場，后句表示所有車位都滿了，兩句應表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，應用but，故so---but

4. drove back onto the street, looked for a parking space.后句很明顯是做伴隨狀語，ed形式是表示被動，而后句邏輯主語為he，他尋找空位應是主動語態(tài)，要用ing形式表示主動，故looked---looking

5. next block were empty.主語為The next block 是單數(shù)，謂語動詞應該用單數(shù)，且本文是過去式，故were--was

6. drove in, parked and hurrying home.本句為三個謂語動詞并列，前兩個是用過去式，故第三個動作應該用過去式，故hurrying---hurried

7. was going.這句話是表示它正在走，而根據(jù)上下文應表示它不見了的意思，gone為形容詞表示不見了、走了的意思，故going--gone

8. telephoned the police to say his car had stolen 他的車是被偷了，應用被動語態(tài)，而該句卻是主動語態(tài)，故had stolen--had been stolen

9. police told him what it had happened 本句為what領導的賓語從句，意思為警察告訴他發(fā)生了什么事，what應該是做had happened 的主語，不需要it在充當主語了，故what it had happened去掉it

10. had to pay 40 dollars to get her car back.本文主人公為男性其her表示的是她的，應用his，故her—his

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