Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
You will never change your life until you change something you do daily.  The secret of your success is found in your daily routine.
注意：①文章開(kāi)頭已給出，無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；
②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
③文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
④詞數(shù)為120左右。
Some of our daily behaviors reflect our attitude towards life.  What our life will be like is based on what we actually do at present.

Answer 1

Some of our daily behaviors reflect our attitude towards life.  What our life will be like is based on what we actually do at present. To change our daily routine is the first step to get access to success.
When I was a middle school student, I found maths boring and tough to learn. So every time I met with a difficult problem. I would skip it and do what was easy to me. As time went by, I was consequently left behind others and even failed the exam. Having been taught a lesson, I made up my mind to change my attitude towards maths and develop a good habit of working out any problems I met no matter how tough they are. Step by step, I caught up with others. With my grades increasing steadily, it turned out that I became a student who was good at maths rather than poor at it.
What I have learnt from my own experience is that our daily routines can influence the way we will go in store. Even a small habit can destroy the base of success. Let’s change our bad habits and employ correct attitude, and what is waiting for us is our days of brilliance.

試題分析：考查開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作：開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的英語(yǔ)提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容列出文章的提綱，這篇文章的話題是通過(guò)日常的生活變化導(dǎo)致成功，要找出文章論述的幾點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)，還有結(jié)合實(shí)際情況說(shuō)明。選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】So every time I met with a difficult problem. I would skip it and do what was easy to me. 這句話是every time引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，what引導(dǎo)的是賓語(yǔ)從句，As time went by, I was consequently left behind others and even failed the exam. 這是as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句，Having been taught a lesson, I made up my mind to change my attitude towards maths and develop a good habit of working out any problems I met no matter how tough they are. 這句話是非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做狀語(yǔ)，和no matter how引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句， With my grades increasing steadily這是with的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)， it turned out that I became a student who was good at maths rather than poor at it.這是固定句型， What I have learnt from my own experience is that our daily routines can influence the way we will go in store. 這句話既有主語(yǔ)從句也有表語(yǔ)從句，