分析 本文主要講述作者和母親去餐館吃飯,母親看到一位老太太不高興,擁抱了老太太,這讓老太太很是高興.作者認(rèn)為母親太好了.
解答 After shopping,Mother and I went to a restaurant for lunch.I notice Mother looking at a nearby table occupy by an elderly woman and∧young couple.They ate silently,and it was clearly that things were not going well.As we left,Mother stopped on their table."Excuse me,"she said,put her arms around the unhappy old woman."You remind me so many of my mother.May I hug you?"The woman smiled happily as she accepted to it.After we left,I said,"That was very nice of you,Mother.So I didn't think she looked like Grandma."Neither did me,"said Mother cheerfully.
詳解:
1.notice改為noticed 考查時(shí)態(tài).全文講述的是過去的事情,要用一般過去時(shí)態(tài).
2.occupy改為occupied 考查過去分詞.table與occupy之間是動賓關(guān)系,用過去分詞短語occupied by an elderly woman and a young couple作后置定語.
3.young前加a 考查冠詞.couple是可數(shù)名詞,單數(shù)形式前加不定冠詞a表示泛指.
4.clearly改為clear 考查形容詞.be動詞后接形容詞作表語.
5.on改為by/at 考查介詞.根據(jù)句意:母親停在他們桌旁.用介詞by/at.
6.put改為putting 考查現(xiàn)在分詞.she與put之間是主謂關(guān)系,用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語.
7.many改為much 考查代詞.此處指回憶,是不可數(shù)名詞,用much.
8.去掉to 考查詞語用法. accept是及物動詞,后接名詞或代詞作賓語時(shí)不需要介詞to.
9.So改為But 考查連詞.前后兩個(gè)分句之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,而非因果關(guān)系,用連詞but.
10.me改為I 考查代詞.此處的倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)是:neither+助動詞+主語,要用主格代詞I.
點(diǎn)評 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說明文,短文故事,書信等,具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性.短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際,從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作.首先,通讀全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯,在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好,再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò).其次,要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò).這是要對文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意.最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍,檢查答案是否正確,感覺是否還有不妥之處,最終形成定稿.
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