Question

【題目】寫作

假定你是李華，最近你在某家英文購物網(wǎng)站上購買了一本喜歡的書---《英國傳統(tǒng)文化》（British Traditional Culture）. 收到之后發(fā)現(xiàn)一些問題。請你給該網(wǎng)站寫一封投訴信，包括以下內(nèi)容：

1.寫信目的。

2.投訴內(nèi)容：兩周才到貨（正常情況下一周即可）；書的封面稍有破損；書的內(nèi)容中，關于餐桌禮儀部分，缺少頁碼P87—P94.

3. 希望換新書或全額退款(full refund)，建議對方重視售后服務。

注意：詞數(shù)100左右；可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Hua.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam，

My name is Li Hua . I’m writing to complain about a copy of book named British Traditional Culture I purchased from your website. But there was a week delay in delivering the book，which had been expected to arrive last Friday.After unpacking , I was surprised to find the back cover broken. Actually what made me annoyed was that its content was not complete at all. The part about table manners from page 87 to 94 was missing.

For the above reasons, I strongly demand either a new one be posted to me immediately or I be given a full refund .By the way, you are expected to pay more attention to your post sale service.

Thanks for your consideration.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：假定你是李華，最近你在某家英文購物網(wǎng)站上購買了一本喜歡的書---《英國傳統(tǒng)文化》（British Traditional Culture）. 收到之后發(fā)現(xiàn)一些問題。請你給該網(wǎng)站寫一封投訴信，包括以下內(nèi)容： 1.寫信目的。

2.投訴內(nèi)容：兩周才到貨（正常情況下一周即可）；書的封面稍有破損；書的內(nèi)容中，關于餐桌禮儀部分，缺少頁碼P87—P94.3. 希望換新書或全額退款(full refund)，建議對方重視售后服務。注意：詞數(shù)100左右；可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

【亮點說明】本文語言精練，結構嚴謹，文章布局合理，句中運用高級句子。I’m writing to complain about a copy of book named British Traditional Culture I purchased from your website. 過去分詞和定語從句作后置定語；But there was a week delay in delivering the book，which had been expected to arrive last Friday.句中使用非限制性定語從句；Actually what made me annoyed was that its content was not complete at all.主語從句運用巧妙；I strongly demand either a new one be posted to me immediately or I be given a full refund .賓語從句中的虛擬語氣完美使用；另外，But，After unpacking , Actually，F(xiàn)or the above reasons, either ---or---的使用為文章增色添彩。