請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示,并結(jié)合事例,用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文。

People are always looking for someone to look up to and imitate. You can set the example by becoming the person that people want to be like. You can help change the world by changing yourself.

注意:①無(wú)須寫標(biāo)題;

②除詩(shī)歌外,文體不限;

③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的一個(gè)事例;

④文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱;

⑤詞數(shù)不少于120,如引用提示語(yǔ)則不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

【解析】

試題分析:本篇書面表達(dá)屬于記敘文。要求我們先理解到一個(gè)現(xiàn)象即人們總是在羨慕,在模仿別人,忘卻自己。這就要求我們對(duì)自身有個(gè)判斷,對(duì)于自己發(fā)展成什么樣的人有個(gè)目標(biāo),而不是盲目抄襲別人。而這篇范文的作者卻能從自身的實(shí)際學(xué)習(xí)生活出發(fā),談到與其不開(kāi)心,脾氣不好,不如換個(gè)心態(tài),提高自己,與人交流,最終提升自己。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如,第一段闡述大部分人現(xiàn)象,用however,轉(zhuǎn)述我們應(yīng)該怎么做。長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合,錯(cuò)落有致。開(kāi)頭不是文筆,有兩個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句nature that…,the belief that。正文中更是把定語(yǔ)從句和狀語(yǔ)從句運(yùn)用的游刃有余。以及獨(dú)立主格Having failed the entrance exam, 都有所體現(xiàn)。此外,文章還使用了大量短語(yǔ)tend to,hold the belief,set the example ,As a result, looking down upon,better than等都是文章亮點(diǎn),得分點(diǎn)。

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