Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。

文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（＾），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)〔\〕劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線(xiàn)，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Jenny:

How nice to hear of you! In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advices.

As we all know, foods like fish, fresh fruit and vegetables is necessary for our body. And you should not eat too many meat. Instead of study all the time, you should take physical exercise as regular as possible. For example, you can play basketball or swim after the school. What’s more, have enough sleep is very important. So I advise you have at least eight hours of sleep every day but not to stay up too late. Only in this way can we keep healthy.

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 hear of → hear from

 advices→ advice

 is necessary→ are necessary

 too many→ too much

 study→studying

 regular - regularly

 after the school – after school

 have enough – having enough

 you have→ you to have

 but→ and

【解析】

試題分析：

 句意，收到你的來(lái)信真好。Hear from是固定用法，意思是收到……來(lái)信。

 advice是不可數(shù)名詞，所以advices→ advice。

 主語(yǔ)是復(fù)數(shù)，所以is necessary→ are necessary。

 meat是不可數(shù)名詞，所以too many→ too much。

 Instead of后面要接動(dòng)詞的-ing形式。

 修飾形容詞“physical”，故用副詞形式。

 放學(xué)，應(yīng)該說(shuō)after school。

 作句子主語(yǔ)，故用動(dòng)名詞。

 advise sb. to do sth.是固定句型，意思是建議某人做某事。

 句意：所以我建議你每天至少睡八小時(shí)并且不要熬夜到很晚。表示并列關(guān)系，所以but→ and。

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)