Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
There once was a little boy who had a bad temper. His father gave him a bag of nails and told him that every time he lost his temper, he must hammer a nail into the back of the fence.
The first day the boy had driven 37 nails into the fence. Over the next few weeks, as he learned to control his anger, the number of nails hammered daily gradually dwindled down. He discovered it was easier to hold his temper than to drive those nails into the fence.
Finally the day came when the boy didn’t lose his temper at all. He told his father about it and the father suggested that the boy now pull out one nail for each day that he was able to hold his temper. The days passed and the young boy was finally able to tell his father that all the nails were gone.
The father took his son by the hand and led him to the fence. He said, “You have done well, my son, but look at the holes in the fence. The fence will never be the same. When you say things in anger, they leave scars just like these. And no matter how many times you say you're sorry, the wounds will still be there.”
寫作內(nèi)容：
1. 以“Anger management”為題約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容。
2. 談?wù)勀愕南敕ǎ?20詞），內(nèi)容包括：
（1）分析憤怒情緒可能產(chǎn)生的后果（至少兩點）；
（2）就如何控制憤怒情緒提出建議（至少兩點）。
寫作要求：
1. 不得直接引用原文中的句子。
2. 作文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和學校名稱。
評分標準：
概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語篇連貫。
Anger management
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Answer 1

Anger management
A bad-tempered boy finally learned to properly manage his anger following his father’s advice---hammering nails into the fence. And he was also made to understand that venting anger can do irreversible harm to others. (35)
If anger is expressed in harmful ways, it can lead to problems---sometimes for you and often for others around you. People with poor anger management are more likely to have problems with personal relationships; what’s worse, they can experience anxiety, depression, even problems with alcohol. In a word, it can affect the overall quality of your life.
To keep your anger in check, you need to recognize what makes you angry and identify the warning signs of anger in your body, so that when you are about to lose it, you can get out of the situation, taking a walk or using other distractions from the situation. But if you feel your anger is out of control, don’t hesitate to seek professional assistance from a psychologist or a support group.

試題分析：本文屬于讀寫任務(wù)寫作，動筆前，一定要認真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。認真看清題目要求，這篇書面表達給了一段材料：先要求以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容，要求有很高的概括提煉的能力，要抓住文章的主題，再以約120個詞寫一篇短文，按照要點去表達，不能有遺漏，寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫作時盡量使用自己會的單詞、詞組和句型，同時也要注意使用一些高級語法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
【亮點說明】范文先是簡單明了的總結(jié)了短文的大意，然后展開論述，其中不乏好的短語：lead to 導致， what’s worse更糟糕的是, be likely to 有可能， In a word總之,一句話，out of control失去控制,  hesitate to猶豫做…，注意這句話：To keep your anger in check, you need to recognize what makes you angry and identify the warning signs of anger in your body, so that when you are about to lose it, you can get out of the situation, taking a walk or using other distractions from the situation.這句話是個長句，包含不定式做目的狀語，what引導的賓語從句，so that引導的結(jié)果狀語從句，when引導的時間狀語從句，還有現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語。