Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其正下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（╲）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞正下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞，請嚴(yán)格按照要求格式修改。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

The person who has taught me most about the life is my grandmother. She was more than just a grandmother to me. When she died a few years before, I felt I lost a really good friend. She always looked very nice on her age. She did everything she could make me feel at home. She was imaginative and would spend hours telling me stories she has made up. I am sure it was because of her which I became a story writer. Apart from kept a young boy entertained, she taught me a large number of important thing on how to behave. I was rather impatient when I was a child and she taught me that good things happened if I could wait for it. She was a positive person but she also taught me how to look for the good in everything.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】去掉most

【2】before— ago

【3】on —for/at

【4】could后加to

【5】去掉has或has —had

【6】which— that

【7】 kept —keeping

【8】thing —things

【9】it —them

【10】but—and

【解析】

試題分析：本文敘述了關(guān)于我的祖母不僅僅教會了我生活,還教我如何尋找生活中一切都好的東西，考查學(xué)生對固定搭配，動詞時態(tài)和語態(tài)，名詞，代詞，連詞，以及定語從句，強調(diào)句等的運用。

【1】考查句式teach sb about sth 教會某人有關(guān)某事。句意：教會了我有關(guān)生活的人是我的祖母。由句意可知去掉most。

【2】考查固定用法some time ago 一段時間前。句意：幾年前當(dāng)她去世時，我覺得我失去了一個很好的朋友。所以before— ago。

【3】考查短語for/at one’s age 以......的年齡/在......的年紀(jì)時。句意：在她那個的歲數(shù)上，她總是看上去精神很不錯。所以on —for/at 。

【4】考查動詞不定式。句意：她做了她能做的所有事，使我感到舒適，無拘束。由句意可知用動詞不定式表目的，所以could后加to。

【5】考查動詞時態(tài)。句意：她富有想象力，會花很多時間給我講她編的故事。過去的動作用過去時，此處可用一般過去時或過去完成時。所以去掉has或has —had。

【6】考查強調(diào)句。句意：我肯定正是因為她，我成為了小說作家。強調(diào)句式：It is/was+強調(diào)部分+tha+其它，所以which— that。

【7】考查非謂語動詞。Apart from+doing，所以kept —keeping。

【8】考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。a large number of+復(fù)數(shù)名詞，所以thing —things。

【9】考查代詞。由上下文可知等待的事情是復(fù)數(shù)，所以it —them。

【10】考查連詞。句意：她是一個積極的人，而且她還教我如何尋找一切美好的東西。由句意可知此處是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，所以but—and。