Question

【題目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

你居住的社區(qū)準(zhǔn)備改建一塊空地，現(xiàn)就兩個(gè)改建方案征求居民意見。方案一：建一個(gè)可以停放30輛車的停車場(chǎng)；方案二：建一個(gè)籃球場(chǎng)和一個(gè)網(wǎng)球場(chǎng)。假設(shè)你是方方，給居委會(huì)(Residential Committee)寫一封信表達(dá)你的想法。你的信必須滿足以下要求：

1. 簡(jiǎn)述你寫信的目的及你支持的改建方案：

2. 說明你的理由。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Residential Committee,

I am writing to agree to the first project that a parking lot for 30 cars will be built where it used to be the unused land. My reasons are as follows.

First of all, as is known to all, the number of private cars is on the increase .It will be convenient for us to park our cars after the parking lot is built, reducing more complaints .Besides, the parking lot can avoid disorderly parking, making the traffic smooth in the community to ensure the resident’s safety. Last but not least, the parking lot in the community increases people's happiness, which is of help to the harmony.

I would appreciate it if you could accept my suggestions.

Yours,

Fang Fang

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信。

第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個(gè)方面的信息。第一，你居住的社區(qū)準(zhǔn)備改建一塊空地，現(xiàn)就兩個(gè)改建方案征求居民意見。方案一：建一個(gè)可以停放30輛車的停車場(chǎng)；方案二：建一個(gè)籃球場(chǎng)和一個(gè)網(wǎng)球場(chǎng)。假設(shè)你是方方，給居委會(huì)(Residential Committee)寫一封信表達(dá)你的想法。你的信必須滿足以下要求：

1. 簡(jiǎn)述你寫信的目的及你支持的改建方案：

2. 說明你的理由。

第二，人稱為第一人稱和第三人稱。第三，時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。

第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為三段。第一段，1. 簡(jiǎn)述你寫信的目的及你支持的改建方案。第二段，說明你的理由。第三段，表達(dá)期望。

第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語(yǔ): used to do sth , on the increase, increases people's happiness, avoid disorderly parking.

第四步：確定較為高級(jí)的句子: as 引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句和現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)First of all, as is known to all, the number of private cars is on the increase .It will be convenient for us to park our cars after the parking lot is built, reducing more complaints. which 引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句Last but not least, the parking lot in the community increases people's happiness, which is of help to the harmony.

第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過渡銜接: First of all, Besides, Last but not least.

第六步：注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。