Question

生活中.你白己或他人曾有過物品不慎丟失而又找回的經(jīng)歷，其間有煩惱、有驚喜、有感慨……請(qǐng)就此寫一篇英語短文。

主要內(nèi)容包括: 1)丟失的物品; 2)物品失而復(fù)得的經(jīng)過; 3) 你的感想。

注意：

1.詞數(shù)100個(gè);

2.不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱.

Answer 1

In our daily life, almost anybody may lose something, which is quite common. What we lost sometimes can be returned in different ways and if so,the feeling is rather impressive . Among the things that I lost and regained, I will never forget the event about my good friend, a dog called Xiaohei. It was five years ago when I was in a junior middle school that Xiaohei and I went out by bus. When I got to the destination, Xiaohei was not in my sight. Perhaps he got down the bus at a stop by mistake. Immediately looking for him was the whole thing I did but it was a pity.That afternoon I cried a lot and I thought I would never see him again. Then a week passing, when I got up to school. I hear a familiar sound. Outside the door stood my dog, mud all over his body. I could not help sobbing at that moment. Only from that moment on have I understood the deep feeling of sympathy .

【解析】

試題分析：本文屬于半開放性書面表達(dá)，敘述物品失而復(fù)得的經(jīng)歷及感受。包括：1)丟失的物品; 2)物品失而復(fù)得的經(jīng)過;3) 你的感想�？忌�根據(jù)實(shí)際情況做適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。使用第一人稱，在敘述過去的事情時(shí)使用一般過去時(shí)，在發(fā)表個(gè)人感想的時(shí)候使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫的過程中，多注意靈活使用定語從句，包括非限制性定語從句。要熟悉英美人寫文章的習(xí)慣，遇到專有地名、人名一定要用非限制性定語從句，強(qiáng)調(diào)唯一性。平時(shí)的英語作文就可以多嘗試使用這些表達(dá)，考試時(shí)才能游刃有余，胸有成竹。

亮點(diǎn)說明：范文中高級(jí)句式的運(yùn)用很好，如In our daily life, almost anybody may lose something, which is quite common中的非限制性定語從句。What we lost sometimes can be returned in different ways and if so,the feeling is rather impressive 中的主語從句。

考點(diǎn)：半開放性書面表達(dá)