Question

12．當(dāng)前不少文學(xué)作品被改編成電影．有人選擇看電影，有人則喜歡讀原著．請你以"Film or book，which do you prefer？"為題，按照下列要點寫一篇英語短文：
1、看電影：省時、有趣、易懂
2、讀原著：細(xì)節(jié)更多、語言優(yōu)美
3、我的看法及理由
注意：1、詞數(shù)：100詞左右． 文章題目已給出（不計入詞數(shù)）．
2、參考詞匯：original work 或 book in the original （原著）
Film or book，which do you prefer？Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original．The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story．Besides，the film is usually more interesting，and it is easier to follow．
Some others have just the opposite opinion．They think that they can get more detailed information from the original．Meanwhile，the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful．
Personally，I agree with the second view．Actually I have more reasons for it．I think I can stay at home，reading quietly in a situation of my own，and what's more，I am able to better understand the author's ideas．In a word，to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it．．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等
高分句型一：
Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original．
有些人認(rèn)為最好是看電影比讀這本書的原文．
高分句型二：
I think I can stay at home，reading quietly in a situation of my own，and what's more，I am able to better understand the author's ideas．
我想我可以呆在家里，在一個我自己的情況看，更重要的是，我能更好地理解作者的思想．

解答 Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original．（高分句型一） The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story．Besides，the film is usually more interesting，and it is easier to follow．
Some others have just the opposite opinion．They think that they can get more detailed information from the original．Meanwhile，the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful．
Personally，I agree with the second view．Actually I have more reasons for it．I think I can stay at home，reading quietly in a situation of my own，and what's more，I am able to better understand the author's ideas（高分句型二）．In a word，to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it．

點評 本文是一篇半開發(fā)性的作文．寫作時，我們既要注意漢語提示的要點，又要準(zhǔn)確表達自己的觀點．因此，要分兩段寫出兩種不同的觀點，在最后一段寫出自己的觀點，要恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接詞與過渡詞．