Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，你的好友Peter前不久隨父母去了英國，他寫信告訴你他很不適應(yīng)國外的校園生活，感到很孤獨并希望你給出建議。請你根據(jù)以下要點用英語給他回封電子郵件。

1. 多交一些朋友；

2. 積極參加各種活動。

注意:

1.詞數(shù):100左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯:adapt to適應(yīng)。

Dear Peter,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear peter,

I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to your new school life in England, but this situation can be easily changed if you take my advice.

First, you should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others. Secondly, why not make some friends? They can help you to forget your loneliness. Thirdly, it would be a good idea if you take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting. By doing so, you will be happier with your new life soon.

I hope you will find these ideas useful.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文, 要求寫一封郵件，建議信。

第一步：

審題: 郵件 建議信

人稱：第一、二人稱

時態(tài)： 一般現(xiàn)在時、一般將來時

2、結(jié)構(gòu)： 總分法，分三部分，第一部分寫信目的——提建議，第二部分說明具體的建議內(nèi)容，第三部分希望建議對對方有幫助。

要點：

1. 說明寫信目的——就對方的問題提建議

2．具體的建議

①努力學(xué)英語，增加與人交流的機會

②多交朋友，減少孤獨感

③積極參加各種活動，豐富自己的生活

3．希望這些建議對對方有幫助，并希望對方接受

第二步：列提綱（重點詞匯、短語 ）

have trouble (in) doing…..；adapt to； take one’s advice；work hard at；opportunity；communicate with；make friends；loneliness；take an active part in；make life interesting；find these ideas useful

第三步：連詞成句

1.You are having trouble adapting to your new school life in England.

2.This situation can be easily changed if you take my advice.

3.You should work hard at English, which can give you more opportunities to communicate with others.

4.Why not make some friends?

5.You can take an active part in all kinds of activities, which will help to make life more interesting.

6.I hope you will find these ideas useful.

根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞進行遣詞造句,適當(dāng)?shù)剡\用句型，注意時態(tài)和主謂一致問題。

第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞)

表示時間順序： First of all; to begin/start with ,In the beginning

Firstly....Secondly.... Lastly / Finally/ In the end

表示并列或補充關(guān)系： what is more; besides , moreover , apart from;

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile , in the meantime, some...some…others

表示轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系：but , however, although , though , yet , while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果關(guān)系：because, as , therefore, As a result , as a consequence , consequently , thus

連句成文，運用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，使句與句之間邏輯性更強、

段與段之間結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。