Question

【題目】 假如你是李華，你的英國筆友George不久前去美國留學(xué)，他給你寫信說很不適應(yīng)那里的生活。請你根據(jù)以下提示用英語給他寫一封回信，鼓勵(lì)他勇敢面對。

要點(diǎn)：1. 尊重當(dāng)?shù)氐娘L(fēng)俗習(xí)慣； 2． 與美國學(xué)生多交流； 3． 積極參加戶外活動(dòng)； 4. 注意與人交往的禮儀。

注意: 1.短文須寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域;

2.短文詞數(shù)120詞左右;

3.內(nèi)容充實(shí)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫;

4.書寫清晰、工整;

5.不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名

Answer 1

【答案】

Example

Dear George,

How nice to hear from you again! I think it is natural for you not to get used to the life there. Here I have some suggestions for you.

First of all, you should respect the local customs there and try to involve yourself in the natives’ lives. Just as the saying goes, “When in Rome, do as Romans do.” Secondly, don’t be afraid to communicate with American students and make friends with them. Friendship will bring you happiness. What’s more, it is better for you to join in more outdoor activities with your friends, which may help you relax and have fun. Finally, mind your own manners and remain modest and honest when getting along with your friends.

I do hope my suggestions will help. May you adapt to your new life and enjoy your stay there.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題解析：這是一篇書信寫作。主要是讓你給不適應(yīng)美國生活的同學(xué)一些建議，題目已經(jīng)給定大致內(nèi)容，寫作時(shí)要注意適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，以保證文章的連貫性。文章第一段簡要介紹了自己寫信的目的，第二段給出自己的建議，第三段寫了自己對朋友的美好祝愿。文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，條理清楚。在第二段中使用了First of all，Secondly, What’s more,Finally,等使文章更有層次感，并且運(yùn)用了祈使句，形式主語，定語從句等句子結(jié)構(gòu)使文章句子看起來更高級，句型更加的豐富多彩。除此之外還用了一系列的詞組如try to do sth，get along with sb，have fun，adapt to等使文章句子表達(dá)通順且生動(dòng)形象，句意更加清晰，不失為一篇佳作。