Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友James由于不愛(ài)運(yùn)動(dòng)、吃垃圾食品上癮等原因陷入了肥胖的困擾中，非�？鄲�，請(qǐng)你通過(guò)電子郵件給他提一些建議和意見(jiàn)，幫助他減肥。

注意:1.詞數(shù):100左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear James,

I have received your e-mail telling me that you are not interested in taking exercise and that you are addicted to eating junk food. Now you are worried about gaining weight. If you want to lose weight, what you should first do is find out why you are overweight.

From your e-mail, it seems that there are two reasons: lack of exercise and an unbalanced diet. I have two suggestions. First, set aside time to exercise regularly. Only in this way can you keep slim. Second, eat more healthy food and stay away from junk food. There are stores that specialize in healthy food, which is a little more expensive but can make a big difference.

I hope my suggestions are helpful. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

美國(guó)朋友James由于不愛(ài)運(yùn)動(dòng)、吃垃圾食品上癮等原因陷入了肥胖的困擾中，非�？鄲�，要求通過(guò)電子郵件給他提一些建議和意見(jiàn)，幫助他減肥。

第一步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文是一封建議信。

第二步：根據(jù)寫(xiě)作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：taking exercise, be addicted to, lose weight, unbalanced diet, exercise regularly, make a big difference.

第三步：根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。

第四步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接和過(guò)渡，書(shū)寫(xiě)一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。