Question

短文改錯： Last week my parents and I took a two-day trip to Emei 　 Mountain in Sichuan．As everyone knows, it's famous 1．________ mountain with all kinds of plants and animals．The weather 2．________ was fine．It was about noon we arrived at the foot of 3．________ the mountain．The three of them were very excited．As we 4．________ climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys, visiting temples 5．________ and told stories．On the way up I was busy taking picture 6．________ since the scenery was so beautiful．The time passes quickly． 7．________ Evening came down．We spent the night in a hotel at the top 8．________ of the mountain．The food was expensive and the service was 9．________ good．I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my 10．________ head touched the pillow．

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解析：

1．Mountain為可數(shù)名詞，所以在famous之前加a。 　　2．該行沒有錯誤。 　　3．此行有兩個分句，中間無任何連接詞，從句意看是個帶有時間狀語從句的復合句，所以noon和we之間加連詞when。 　　4．從上下文可判斷人稱代詞them應改為us。 　　5．Visit一詞應該和前面的fed以及后面的told并列，故改visiting為visited。 　　6．Picture應該是復數(shù)。 　　7．從上下文可知pass的時態(tài)應是過去時態(tài)，即passed。 　　8．由于受中文影響，“夜幕降臨”以為是came down，實際上應該去掉down。 　　9．And應改為but，因為兩句之間是轉折關系。 　　10．應該去掉at，因為名詞短語the moment起連詞的作用可以引導時間狀語從句，表示“一…就”，相當于as soon as。而at the moment是“此刻；那時”的意思，在句中作時間狀語。