Question

1．第二節(jié)
假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華．請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，用英文寫一篇周記，記述春節(jié)前你跟奶奶學(xué)做剪紙的過程．詞數(shù)不少于60．
提示詞：剪紙，窗花 paper cut

Answer 1

分析 本文是圖畫類作文，要求根據(jù)四幅圖的先后順序及所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)用英文寫一篇周記，記述春節(jié)前你跟奶奶學(xué)做剪紙的過程，既是情景作文又是一種提綱作文．
在寫作時，以第一和第三人稱為主．時態(tài)以一般過去時為主．根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，抓住細(xì)節(jié)按順序安排好材料．
重要短語：visit sb （拜訪某人），make paper cuts（剪紙），according to（根據(jù)），the Chinese tradition （中國傳統(tǒng)），be attracted by （被…所吸引），can't wait to do（迫不及待地做某事），have a try（試一試），be born（誕生），put up（張貼），such as（例如），be filled with（充滿，裝滿），share sth with sb（與某人分享某物），call on sb（拜訪某人），feel proud of（覺得自豪），receive one's appreciation（接受某人的感謝）．
【高分句型一】
1．Entering the room，I found her busy making paper cuts．
此處是由現(xiàn)在分詞短語"Entering the room"作時間狀語，主句為"I found her busy making paper cuts"，主句的主語為"I"與所給動詞"enter"存在邏輯上的主動關(guān)系．
【高分句型二】
2．Looking at the calendar，I realized it was just the right date for room decoration according to the Chinese tradition．
 此處是由現(xiàn)在分詞短語"Looking at the calendar"作時間狀語，主句為"I realized it was just the right date for room decoration according to the Chinese tradition"，主句的主語為"I"與所給動詞"look"構(gòu)成邏輯上的主動關(guān)系．
【高分句型三】
3．Attracted by the delicate works，I couldn't wait to have a try．
此處是由過去分詞短語"Attracted by the delicate works"作原因狀語，主句為"I couldn't wait to have a try"，主句的主語為"I"與所給動詞"attract"構(gòu)成邏輯上的被動關(guān)系．
【高分句型四】
4．It wasn't long before my creations were"born"．
此處是由固定句型"It+was not+long before+一般過去時的句子"作原因狀語，意為"沒過多久就…"．

解答 On February 6，I went to visit my grandma．Entering the room，I found her busy making paper cuts．【高分句型一】Looking at the calendar，I realized it was just the right date for room decoration according to the Chinese tradition．【高分句型二】（Picture 1進(jìn)屋看到奶奶在剪紙）
Attracted by the delicate works，I couldn't wait to have a try．【高分句型三】With her patient instruction，I learnt the basic steps and skills of making paper cuts．It wasn't long before my creations were"born"． （Picture 2 奶奶悉心教導(dǎo)剪紙技巧）【高分句型四】Then eagerly，we put them up．With different designs on the windows，such as a monkey and the Chinese character"Fu"，our room was filled with a festival atmosphere．（Picture 3 展示剪紙成果）
To share our happiness with others，we called on our next door neighbors and gave them some of our paper cuts．I felt proud when receiving their appreciation of our gifts．（Picture 4  與鄰居分享剪紙成果樂趣）
Paper cuts made this Spring Festival more special．（總結(jié)概括）

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