分析 這是提綱類作文,根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱展開敘述,時態(tài)應(yīng)該以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主.內(nèi)容分成三部分:一 點明寫信的原因;二使他擺脫困境的建議,這是文章的主體,包括1.了解當?shù)氐纳盍晳T,尊重當?shù)仫L俗.2.與美國學生多交流.3.多參加戶外活動.4.注意與人交往的禮儀;三 表達祝愿.
高分句型:
1.Secondly,there should be plenty of American students whom(引導定語從句,代指先行詞plenty of American students ) you may turn to for help(turn to sb for help表示"向某人求助") as well as( as well as表示:也包括) communicate and go out with.
第二,應(yīng)該有很多美國學生你可以向他們求助,和他們交流,跟他們一起出去玩.
And finally,I suggest (此處省略了賓語從句的引導詞that)you pay attention to the manners while (while連接時間狀語從句,表示"在此期間")you make friends or communicate with the local
最后,我建議你在和當?shù)厝私煌徒挥训臅r候注意自己的禮儀.
解答 Dear Jack,
How is everything going in England?I know it is hard for you to get accustomed to such a new environment,but I trust that you can make it bravely and successfully!I have been abroad before so would you like some suggestions from me(點明寫信的原因)?
First of all,we should befamiliar with the local customs and life,and we need respect their customs andtraditions.If you have anything confusing,you may speak up to your British friends.I believe they will help you understand.Secondly,there should be plenty of American students whom you may turn to for help as well as communicate and go out with(高分句型一).Whynot?Additionally,please try to do more outdoor activities.The more sports you do the healthier and happier you will become.Trust me on that!And finally,I suggest you pay attention to the manners while you make friends or communicate with the local(高分句型二).Just to do as the Romans do when in Rome(使他擺脫困境的建議).
Wish youhave a wonderful time in England(表達祝愿)!
Yours,
Lihua
點評 為了使文章有條理性,我們要用一些表達層次的連接詞,例如本文中的First of all,Secondly,Additionally,finally,.這些詞語的使用使文章條理清楚,是加分的一個亮點.
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