Question

閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。
Some yeas ago, leaving the farm to work in the city, three brothers were employed by the same company and on the same pay. But three years later, they received different wages. So their father was confused and decided to pay a visit to the boss, who told him that he would let his sons explain for themselves.
The three brothers were asked by the supervisor to go to the airport to get a cargo inventory at different times. Jim, who received 500 dollars a month, got the information on the phone instead of going to the airport himself. Frank, the 1,000 dollars a month brother came back with a list of more cargoes. George, the 1,500 dollars a month brother came back with detailed information and also did something extra without being told.
【寫作內(nèi)容】
1. 以30個(gè)詞概括文章內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；
2. 就“態(tài)度決定一切”這個(gè)主題發(fā)表你的看法， 至少包含以下的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，該部分的字?jǐn)?shù)為120字左右。
（1）你認(rèn)為是什么導(dǎo)致三兄弟的薪酬差異以及你從故事中得到什么啟示；
（2）舉一例對(duì)比事例說(shuō)明不同的學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度產(chǎn)生不同的結(jié)果；
（3）你對(duì)“態(tài)度決定一切”的看法。
【寫作要求】
1. 在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

Answer 1

Three brothers, who worked for the same company, received different wages due to their different attitudes to their work, which shows right attitude is of great help to one’s work.
Their different attitudes to their work result in their different wages. From the story I can conclude that those who take positive attitudes towards work will be rewarded.
Different attitudes lead to different results. Take Xiao Hua, my classmate, as an example. Not only does he put his heart into study but he is also helpful both to teachers and students. So he has become a top student in our class, even in the grade. With his diligence and concentration, he is bound to succeed in entering his ideal university. However, Xiao Hua never cares about his study because he is addicted to playing games and he turns a deaf ear to the teachers’ advice. As a result, he falls far behind others in his study.
In my opinion, attitude is everything. No matter what you do, you must do it well even if you may fail many times. Sooner or later you will be rewarded for your positive attitude towards your work or life.

試題分析：這是根據(jù)原來(lái)文章的內(nèi)容寫一篇文章，首先要讀懂原文內(nèi)容，把握文章的中心思想，然后按要求寫文章，1. 請(qǐng)用30個(gè)詞概括短文的要點(diǎn)；然后用約120個(gè)詞就就“態(tài)度決定一切”這個(gè)主題發(fā)表你的看法，并包括如下要點(diǎn)：（1）你認(rèn)為是什么導(dǎo)致三兄弟的薪酬差異以及你從故事中得到什么啟示；（2）舉一例對(duì)比事例說(shuō)明不同的學(xué)習(xí)態(tài)度產(chǎn)生不同的結(jié)果；（3）你對(duì)“態(tài)度決定一切”的看法。同時(shí)注意題目中的寫作要求，1. 在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。寫作時(shí)要準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合文章內(nèi)容。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于任務(wù)類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要讀懂文章內(nèi)容，認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。