Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

A wealthy man and his son liked to collect rare works of art. They had everything in their collection, from Picasso to Raphael. They would often sit together and admire these great works of art.

When the Vietnam conflict broke out, the son went to war. Unfortunately he died in battle while rescuing another soldier. The father was in deep sorrow for his only son.

About a month later, just before Christmas, there was a knock at the door. A young man stood at the door with a large package in his hands. He said, "Sir, you don't know me, I am the soldier for whom your son gave his life." "He saved many lives that day, and he was carrying me to safety when a bullet struck him in the heart and killed him instantly." "He often talked about you, and your love of art." The young man held out this package. "I know this isn't much." "I'm not a great artist, but I think your son would have wanted you to have this."

The father opened the package. It was a picture of his son, painted by the young man. He stared in surprise at the way the soldier captured the personality of his son in the painting. The father was so drawn to the eyes that his own eyes welled with tears. He thanked the young man and offered to pay for the painting. "Oh, no sir, I could never repay what your son did for me. It's a gift."

The father hung the picture on the hall. Every time visitors came to his home he took them to see the portrait of his son before he showed them any of the other great works he had collected.

The man died a few months later. There was to be a great auction(拍賣) of his art collection. Many influential people gathered, excited over seeing the great paintings and having the opportunity to purchase one for their collection.

注意: 1. 所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2. 應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞；

3. 續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4. 續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

Paragraph 1:

On the platform sat the painting of the son.

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Paragraph 2:

Finally a voice came from the back of the room.

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Answer 1

【答案】Paragraph 1:

On the platform sat the painting of the son. The auctioneer banged his hammer. "We will start the bidding with the picture of the son. Who will bid for this painting?" There was silence. Then a voice in the back of the room angrily shouted, "We didn't come to see this picture. We want to see his great works of art." But the auctioneer continued. "Will somebody bid for this painting? Who will take the son?" (67)

Paragraph 2:

Finally a voice came from the back of the room. "I'll give $10.00 for the painting." It was the gardener of the father and his son. Being a poor man it was all he could afford. "We have $10, who will bid $20?" No response. "Going once, twice, SOLD for $10!" "Now the auction is over!" The auctioneer laid down his hammer and explained, "When I was called to conduct this auction, I was told that only the painting of the son would be auctioned. And whoever purchased the picture of the son would receive all the father’s possessions, including the paintings." (92)

【解析】

這是一篇讀后續(xù)寫。

通過閱讀所給文章可知，講述的是一對父子喜歡收集藝術(shù)品，后來兒子在一次營救戰(zhàn)友時不幸陣亡。 一個月后，兒子所營救的士兵為父親送來了兒子的畫作。父親把畫掛在大廳里。每次有客人到他家來，他總是先帶他們?nèi)タ此麅鹤拥漠嬒�，然后才給他們看他收藏的其他偉大作品。幾個月后，這名男子去世。他的藝術(shù)收藏品將舉行一次盛大的拍賣。

續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，第一段開頭是：平臺上放著兒子的畫像。所以后文應(yīng)該是競拍的過程。應(yīng)著重描述競拍者對這幅畫的態(tài)度。第二段開頭是：最后，一個聲音從房間后面?zhèn)鱽怼９屎笪膽?yīng)當描述這位競拍畫像的人的情況，以及故事最后的結(jié)局是：凡買兒子畫像的人，就能得到父親所賜的一切，連畫也不例外。

續(xù)寫時要求使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語增加了寫作難度，我們要熟悉所給劃線詞語，恰當?shù)臅r候加以運用。最后還要注意所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。按要求完成寫作任務(wù)。