Question

【題目】學(xué)校將組織一次志愿者活動，現(xiàn)有兩種方案，一種是去故宮博物院（The Palace Museum）當(dāng)解說人員（narrator），一種是去兒童福利院（children’s welfare institution）當(dāng)服務(wù)人員。假如你是李華，請你用英語給組織活動的陳老師寫一封100~120個詞的信，內(nèi)容包括：

1、選擇其中的一種方案，或者自己另選一個方案

2、陳述理由

3、相關(guān)準(zhǔn)備

注意：信的開頭已給出（不計入詞數(shù)）。

Dear Mr. Chen ,

I’m writing to recommend

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Yours ,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Mr. Chen ,

I’m writing to recommend that we should go to the Palace Museum as narrators. My reasons are as follows.

Firstly, it’s a good chance for us to learn about the Palace Museum, one of the most famous tourist resorts in Beijing with a history of 600 years. Secondly, we are good at speaking Mandarin and English, so we can easily introduce them to the visitors from home and abroad in the two languages. The last but not least, the narrators will be a valuable job experience where we can help others as well as benefit ourselves.

As for the preparation, I think we should practice again and again in advance. Some materials such as pictures or schedules should be well prepared. Meanwhile, we’d better bring speakers in case to speak loudly and clearly.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱作文， 給組織活動的陳老師寫一封信說明學(xué)校將組織的一次志愿者活動的兩種方案。請你選擇其中的一種方案，或者自己另選一個方案，陳述理由并作相關(guān)準(zhǔn)備。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點就是主要內(nèi)容。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫。本文寫作時可以按照提示的3個方面的內(nèi)容進(jìn)行介紹。3、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時說明情況。以第一人稱為主。4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如where引導(dǎo)的定語從句。還有短語well worth, as well as, in case等。.first, second , as for, meanwhile的使用使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。