Question

某英文報就近年來我國學(xué)生出國留學(xué)低齡化的利弊在報上展開討論，希望廣大讀者暢所欲言，就此事發(fā)表自己的看法。假設(shè)你是中學(xué)生李華，請用英語給編輯寫一封信，談?wù)勀愕目捶�，并說明理由。100詞左右。
(注意：信的開頭已給出，字?jǐn)?shù)不計算在內(nèi)。)
Dear editor,
I’m writing to tell you about my opinion on Chinese students going abroad for further studies at an early age.
 
 
 
 
 

Answer 1

Dear editor,
I'm writing to tell you my opinion on Chinese students going abroad for further studies at an early age.
I agree that Chinese students going to study abroad is a good thing, which helps us to know more about foreign countries, but I don't think it necessary for us to do that so early.
The education in China and that in foreign countries both have advantages and disadvantages. The most important thing for us Chinese students to do at present is to know our country, people and culture well. Without that, we'll have no root and cannot have a good understanding of other countries, people and cultures. Besides, going to study in foreign countries at too early an age not only costs a lot of money, it could also bring serious problems. Taking care of themselves is one of them.
In my opinion, as primary or middle school students, we should devote our time to studying harder in our own country and improving ourselves, when the chance to study abroad arrives, we'll grasp it and make the best use.

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【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如go abroad，it necessary for sb. to do，at present，have a good understanding of，take care of，in one’s opinion，devote … to …；還運用which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句，動名詞短語作主語；并注意了句子的銜接如and，not only … but …，besides，when等等。