Question

你叫林濤，是一名中學生，你對部分同學迷于玩電子游戲(video games)的現象很著急，便向一家英文報社編輯部寄了一封信，闡述了玩電子游戲的壞處。

要點如下：

1．電子游戲在學生中很流行，有些學生整天玩電子游戲，忘了做作業(yè)，甚至逃學（play truant）。

2．玩電子游戲要花很多錢，有的經常向父母要錢，有的經常向同學借錢，有的甚至偷同學的錢。

3．過分玩電子游戲使店主受益，對同學的學習和健康不利。

4．希望政府采取措施加以制止。

注意：1．詞數120左右 2．全文包括以上內容，但不要逐字翻譯 3．信的開頭已給出。

Dear editor,

Now video games are very popular among the school students. _____________________

 

Answer 1

Dear editor,

Now video games are very popular among the school students. Some students are so interested in the game that they spend all day playing. Sometimes they forget to do their homework and some even play truant. Each time they have to pay much money. In order to play video games they often ask their parents for more money, some often borrow money from other students, some even steal money from their classmates, which have brought out every bad effects.

Too much video game playing needs time, money and energy. The owners benefit a lot but it’s not good for the students’ study and health.

I do hope measures will be taken by the government to prevent students from playing video games.

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文。你叫林濤，是一名中學生，你對部分同學迷于玩電子游戲(video games)的現象很著急，便向一家英文報社編輯部寄了一封信，闡述了玩電子游戲的壞處。要點如下：1．電子游戲在學生中很流行，有些學生整天玩電子游戲，忘了做作業(yè)，甚至逃學（play truant）。2．玩電子游戲要花很多錢，有的經常向父母要錢，有的經常向同學借錢，有的甚至偷同學的錢。3．過分玩電子游戲使店主受益，對同學的學習和健康不利。4．希望政府采取措施加以制止。需要寫的內容已經粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當添加些內容，使文章更充實。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【亮點說明】In order to play video games they often ask their parents for more money, some often borrow money from other students, some even steal money from their classmates, which have brought out every bad effects. 這里含有一個非限制性定語從句。

考點：提綱類書面表達