Question

假設(shè)你班將進(jìn)行一次英語晚會，主題為“中學(xué)生應(yīng)該如何使用家長給的零花錢”。請你根據(jù)提示寫一篇發(fā)言稿。

使用方式	好處
存入銀行	養(yǎng)成節(jié)約的習(xí)慣
購買書籍	獲取知識
其他	培養(yǎng)興趣（音樂、體育、集郵等）

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2.參考詞匯：零花錢pocket money  節(jié)約thrift
Dear friends, I’m glad to have the chance to speak to many classmates at present. Today I’d like to talk about_____________________________________________________________

Answer 1

Dear friends, I’m glad to have the chance to speak to so many classmates at present. Today I’d like to talk about how middle school students should deal with their pocket money properly.
As is known to all, we can easily get pocket money from our parents if we want to. But it is no good for us spending it at will. In my opinion, we may spend some on books and magazines, from which we can get a lot of knowledge and pleasure. If we love music, sports or stamp collecting, we can develop the interests in them by using some of our pocket money. On the other hand, if possible, we’d better put some in the bank, which will help us form the habit of thrift. Don’t you think so? I really hope that you will give me your opinions about it. Thank you.­­­­

試題分析：考查提綱類作文的寫作。文章的要點(diǎn)是以表格的形式給出來的，考生需要做的就是根據(jù)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行拓展，不要有遺漏。難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達(dá)文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實(shí)現(xiàn)同樣的目的。這篇范文的亮點(diǎn)很多:如：As is known to all, we can easily get pocket money from our parents if we want to.和 it is no good for us spending it at will. 也要使用合適的連接詞來連接各要點(diǎn)，使文章成為一個整體。如：On the other hand, In my opinion等。
點(diǎn)評：提綱類作文的關(guān)鍵在于表達(dá)方式的選擇和要點(diǎn)的完備，不能有遺漏或者省略。因為本文的要求是不能寫出提綱式，所以在寫作的時候要變換句式，不能一成不變，一種句式多次使用就不好了。